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根据所给信息,请你给Lucy回封信

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Lucy有三个烦恼:1、She has a sore throat; 2 Her mother wants her to drink milk every day, but she doesn't like it. 3 She isn't quite good at English.请你给她回封信,在你的信中,应至少帮她解决两个问题。60----80字 Dear Lucy, I heard to your news to make me sad. So, I take your adbice. In the first, you should go to see a doctor. That can make you get better , In the second, Drinking milk is good for your health. You should listen to your mom's says. In the third , you can try reading loudly and you should read lots of newspapers and megzines. Maybe you should write and read a lot of words. So, your English should very good. This is my advice . You may think them. Yours, Sun 因为我英语作文不是很会写,请老师详细解答,写出写作思路,谢谢!
根据所给信息,请你给Lucy回封信
解题思路: 根据给出的信息并结合我们所学过的教材内容来给Lucy写回信。作文不好,首先要在平时多积累基本短语和句型。做好3a 部分的课文要熟练背诵。
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Lucy有三个烦恼:1、She has a sore throat; 2 Her mother wants her to drink milk every day, but she doesn't like it. 3 She isn't quite good at English.请你给她回封信,在你的信中,应至少帮她解决两个问题。60----80字
Dear Lucy, I heard to your news to make me sad. So, I take your adbice. In the first, you should go to see a doctor. That can make you get better , In the second, Drinking milk is good for your health. You should listen to your mom's says. In the third , you can try reading loudly and you should read lots of newspapers and megzines. Maybe you should write and read a lot of words. So, your English should very good. This is my advice . You may think them. Yours, 你写的回信在内容上基本上都涉及到了Lucy所提到的三个问题,也提到了解决问题的建议,写作思路也对,但是在语言表达和句型语法结构上都不是很正确。下面老师按照你的思路,在不改变原貌的基础上再把这篇作文重写一遍,仅供参考:
Dear Lucy, I am very sorry to hear that you has a sore throat, first you should drink some hot tea with honey ,then you should go to see a doctor. That can make you get better ,Drinking milk is good for your health,although you don't like it,I think you had better drink it every day . I know you are not good at English .Don't worry ,you should try to read English loudly and do some English reading every day .Maybe you should write and read a lot of words.then your English should be very good This is my advice . You may think them. Yours, 小同学,你还满意吗?如有问题我们可以继续讨论。
最终答案:略