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老师好，我想说“观点如下”是不是可以表述成 various opinions are as followings。新颖一些的写法应该有哪几句呢？麻烦您啦，请严格一些。
解题思路： 作文
解题过程：
学生网上交友很普遍，但人们仍持不同意见。请以“题目略”为题，写一篇文章。
赞成：1、广交朋友 2、可自由表达思想 3、有利于外语学习 反对：1、浪费时间 2、影响学习 3、可能上当受骗
你的观点……
Currently, as the Internet develops rapidly, we hold a heated discussion about whether students should make on-line friends. Various opinions are as followings:
Some supporters believe it's quite a good idea to make more friends. Besides, not only
can we express our ideas freely but（） improve our English grades as well.
Others, on the contray, stand on a different ground. Initially, it occupies too much time. Furthermore, if we are addicted to the Internet, troubles will be added to our study. Finally, so young are students that they may be cheated.
To favor or not to favor, that still remains a problem. In my view, we should balance
its benefits in terms of our personal character.
整篇作文立意很好，段落层次分明，说理清楚，但是行文稍显稚嫩，尤其是连接词的使用，不要太频繁，这样反而给人一种有意修饰的感觉。反色显示部分改动一下，请你阅读一下，比原来可能好些吧！
As the Internet is developing rapidly, we held a heated discussion about whether students should make friends on-line. Various opinions are as follows:
Some supporters believe it's quite a good idea to make more friends. Not only can we express our ideas freely but we can improve our English grades as well.
Others, on the contary, stand on a different ground. it occupies too much time. Furthermore, if we are addicted to the Internet, troubles will be added to our study. Finally, so young are we students that we may be cheated.
Whether we should make more friends on line still remains a problem. In my view, we should keep a balance between friendship and our lessons. What is more important is that we should make fullest use of our time and energy to study well.
同学你好！我是Frank，很高兴为你答题，如有疑问请留言，我会在第一时间做回复。祝你学习进步，生活愉快
最终答案：略
解题过程：
学生网上交友很普遍，但人们仍持不同意见。请以“题目略”为题，写一篇文章。
赞成：1、广交朋友 2、可自由表达思想 3、有利于外语学习 反对：1、浪费时间 2、影响学习 3、可能上当受骗
你的观点……
Currently, as the Internet develops rapidly, we hold a heated discussion about whether students should make on-line friends. Various opinions are as followings:
Some supporters believe it's quite a good idea to make more friends. Besides, not only
can we express our ideas freely but（） improve our English grades as well.
Others, on the contray, stand on a different ground. Initially, it occupies too much time. Furthermore, if we are addicted to the Internet, troubles will be added to our study. Finally, so young are students that they may be cheated.
To favor or not to favor, that still remains a problem. In my view, we should balance
its benefits in terms of our personal character.
整篇作文立意很好，段落层次分明，说理清楚，但是行文稍显稚嫩，尤其是连接词的使用，不要太频繁，这样反而给人一种有意修饰的感觉。反色显示部分改动一下，请你阅读一下，比原来可能好些吧！
As the Internet is developing rapidly, we held a heated discussion about whether students should make friends on-line. Various opinions are as follows:
Some supporters believe it's quite a good idea to make more friends. Not only can we express our ideas freely but we can improve our English grades as well.
Others, on the contary, stand on a different ground. it occupies too much time. Furthermore, if we are addicted to the Internet, troubles will be added to our study. Finally, so young are we students that we may be cheated.
Whether we should make more friends on line still remains a problem. In my view, we should keep a balance between friendship and our lessons. What is more important is that we should make fullest use of our time and energy to study well.
同学你好！我是Frank，很高兴为你答题，如有疑问请留言，我会在第一时间做回复。祝你学习进步，生活愉快
最终答案：略