搜狗做题网帮忙改下英语作文Dear friends,As I thought,you must know how importan
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帮忙改下英语作文
Dear friends,
As I thought,you must know how important reading book is!Proverb says that knowledge is power.Whatever how technology advanced,book is also the main way to gain knowledge.Now I will tell you the reason why reading books is important.
Reading books not only can open your mind but also make you clever and happier.Also it can help us in studying and growing as a person.If you want to get good grades,you must reading more books than each other.
But the current situation is----many students take the free time to listen the music,watch TV,surfing on the Internet rather than reading book along.I think that is because of students now are liking stars,following the train,maybe they don't know do these things may take up their free time,so many of them says that they haven't enough time to read!Maybe they don't know that won't help them any.
Nowadays I propose people to read more books and read good books.You will have effects by reading book!Thank you for reading the mail,reading just now!
Your friend.
第三段中第一句话改为Reading books can not only open your mind but also make you clever and happier.这么严重的错误刚发现，真汗！
Dear friends,
As I thought,you must know how important reading book is!Proverb says that knowledge is power.Whatever how technology advanced,book is also the main way to gain knowledge.Now I will tell you the reason why reading books is important.
Reading books not only can open your mind but also make you clever and happier.Also it can help us in studying and growing as a person.If you want to get good grades,you must reading more books than each other.
But the current situation is----many students take the free time to listen the music,watch TV,surfing on the Internet rather than reading book along.I think that is because of students now are liking stars,following the train,maybe they don't know do these things may take up their free time,so many of them says that they haven't enough time to read!Maybe they don't know that won't help them any.
Nowadays I propose people to read more books and read good books.You will have effects by reading book!Thank you for reading the mail,reading just now!
Your friend.
第三段中第一句话改为Reading books can not only open your mind but also make you clever and happier.这么严重的错误刚发现，真汗！
粗粗看了一遍,从头到尾都是reading books ,reading books. rending本身就可以使阅读的意思了,比如说：I like reading and writing.意思就是我喜欢阅读和写作.
so,知道怎么改了吧,而且本篇文章虽然粗粗看起来写得还可以,但是仔细研究一下就有很多问题：
1. 没什么层次.我们强调阅读的重要性,针对这种议论性质的文章,一般用firsely, the second(the following reason is that)这种词汇来增强文章的结构性和条理性,而纵观你的这篇文章,条理就不是很清晰了.
2. 一些基本的错误: 比如“ut the current situation is----many students take the free time to listen the music,watch TV,surfing on the Internet rather than reading book along.”句中听音乐listen music怎么会是“listen the music”呢?还有“along”对吗?不是alone吗?这是很明显的错误,而且我只是随便举一个例子,文中还很多错误.
3. 词汇不够丰富,看来看去就那么几个简单的单词,要"yahoo"一些.比如“I think that”这是很口语的词,如果用“In my opinion”就显得有一点水平了,如果用“I support that”就更显生动了
当然,这篇文章也有好的地方,比如作者尽量用关联词串起很多的长句,也用了一些宾语从句,定语从句,这对写作是很有帮助的.
不打了,累死了
so,知道怎么改了吧,而且本篇文章虽然粗粗看起来写得还可以,但是仔细研究一下就有很多问题：
1. 没什么层次.我们强调阅读的重要性,针对这种议论性质的文章,一般用firsely, the second(the following reason is that)这种词汇来增强文章的结构性和条理性,而纵观你的这篇文章,条理就不是很清晰了.
2. 一些基本的错误: 比如“ut the current situation is----many students take the free time to listen the music,watch TV,surfing on the Internet rather than reading book along.”句中听音乐listen music怎么会是“listen the music”呢?还有“along”对吗?不是alone吗?这是很明显的错误,而且我只是随便举一个例子,文中还很多错误.
3. 词汇不够丰富,看来看去就那么几个简单的单词,要"yahoo"一些.比如“I think that”这是很口语的词,如果用“In my opinion”就显得有一点水平了,如果用“I support that”就更显生动了
当然,这篇文章也有好的地方,比如作者尽量用关联词串起很多的长句,也用了一些宾语从句,定语从句,这对写作是很有帮助的.
不打了,累死了
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