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一篇英语作文,请大家改一改,指出不足指出,以及错误的地方,打个分,
My grandpa
She often get up early every day ,At six o'clock ,She has alredy cooked breakfast for us .At eleven O'colck ,She will ready to cook lunch.After lunch ,She will watvh TV for a O'clock and go for a walk in park .She hardly run.Some tinmes ,She goes to frends' gome talk,.and some times prends' goes to her home .She is a this person,very hard .very kind .
My grandpa
She often get up early every day ,At six o'clock ,She has alredy cooked breakfast for us .At eleven O'colck ,She will ready to cook lunch.After lunch ,She will watvh TV for a O'clock and go for a walk in park .She hardly run.Some tinmes ,She goes to frends' gome talk,.and some times prends' goes to her home .She is a this person,very hard .very kind .
She often gets up early every day .At six o'clock ,she has alredy cooked breakfast for us .At eleven O'colck ,She will be ready to cook lunch.After lunch ,She will watvh TV for an hour and go for a walk in park . She hardly run.Sometimes ,She goes to friends' home to have a talk,and some times friends go to her home .She is such a woman,very hard .very kind .
不改变原意的前提下大概改了下语法和拼写错误 LZ自己对照吧 不足么..不客气的说有很多,此文严重被中文思想干扰,流水帐...分没法打...不知道是什么层次的人写的...LZ补充下...
不改变原意的前提下大概改了下语法和拼写错误 LZ自己对照吧 不足么..不客气的说有很多,此文严重被中文思想干扰,流水帐...分没法打...不知道是什么层次的人写的...LZ补充下...