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请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误:“记得以前,我去一家店修理我的psp,由于要等很长一。。。”

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请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误:“记得以前,我去一家店修理我的psp,由于要等很长一。。。”
(中文是想要表达的意思,翻译不必和中文完全一样)
中文部分:
记得以前,我去一家店修理我的psp,由于要等很长一段时间。店员递给我一个wii的手柄,让我玩一款网球游戏。一开始我也不是很有兴趣,只是对着屏幕随手挥了几下,结果屏幕里竟然每个球都接住了。这让我以为我有玩这游戏的天赋,于是我有了点兴趣,开始很认真的玩起这个游戏。动作幅度也变大了。这时候店员跑过来对我对我道歉,因为他没有帮我把wii的手柄的电源打开。原来我一直是对着一段游戏演示视频再玩。这让我每次想起这件事都觉得很丢脸。
我的翻译:
I remember one day, I went to a shop to repair my PSP. Because it taken time, so the shop assistant pass me a Wii game pads let me play a tennis game speed time. In the beginning, I was not very interested to play it, I just shaken the game pads casual, but caught every ball surprisingly, then I thought I maybe have some talent to play this game, this gave me some interesting, and I started playing this game seriously. But just at this time, the shop assistant came to me and apologized, she told me that she forget turn on my game pads. Actually I was not playing this game but just watched a demo video about this game. That made me very shamed and every time when I memories this thing, I feel not good.
请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误:“记得以前,我去一家店修理我的psp,由于要等很长一。。。”
第二句because it taken time应该是because it took me a lot of time,还有后面I just shaken the game pads casual应该是I just shook the game pads casual,后面this gave me some interesting应该是it made me interested in it;But just at this time可以直接写成but then;she told me that she forget turn on my game pads应该改成... to turn on...;后面直接用过去时就行