As is shown in the chart ,some import changes have taken pla

As is shown in the chart ,some import changes have taken place in the past years with regard to the number of professors` and students` cheating.There has been a steady rise in the percentage of they cheating from 2001 to 2005.
It is no difficult job for us to come up with the some possible factors that underlie the above chart In the first place,oweing to the education of reform,more and more people get the higher education,the increase of students lead to the decline of quality.Their ability of writing by themselves is in the low,so they always cheat in the university .In the second place,with the develop of communication.It is convenience that search information.So we becoming lazier and lazier to write by ourselves.In fact,the behavior of cheating has resulted a lot of harm in our society.
As for as I am concerned,we should take some actions to stop the trend .In the one hand ,we must make the professor and the student to have the aknowledge that publish their own idea .In the other hand ,we should establish the program of suspervise.Don`t give the chance to people of wanting to cheat.Only by taking effective measures can we stop the trend.

As is shown in the drawing above ,some important changes have taken place in the past years with regard to the number of professors` and students` cheating. There has been a steady rise in the percentage of their cheating from 2001 to 2005.
It is no difficult job for us to come up with some possible factors that underlie the above chart In the first place, oweing to the education of reform, more and more people get the higher education, the increase of students lead to the decline of quality. Their ability of writing by themselves is in the low, so they always cheat in the university .In the second place, with the develop of communication. It is convenience that search information. So we becoming lazier and lazier to write by ourselves. In fact, the behavior of cheating has resulted a lot of harm in our society.
As for as I am concerned, we should take some actions to stop the trend .In the one hand , we must make the professor and the student to have the aknowledge that publish their own idea . In the other hand ,we should establish the program of suspervise. Don`t give the chance to people of wanting to cheat. Only by taking effective measures can we stop the trend.
再问： 只改了一点点呀 没有别的问题了吗？
再答： 呵呵，刚刚比较忙。 In the second place, with the development of communication，It is convenient to search information.So we have been becoming more and more lazier to write by ourselves. In fact, the behavior of cheating has resulted in a lot of harm to our society. In the one hand , professors and students must be made to have the knowledge of publishing their own idea .In the other hand ,we should establish the system of suspervision. Only by taking these effective measures can we stop the trend. 水平有限，请指正。