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请帮我检查和修改一下这封邮件（很短）,

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请帮我检查和修改一下这封邮件（很短）,
这是我给一位英国网络作家写的邮件,怕有错的和不地道的地方,有什么不合适的地方,请帮我改一下,
Christmas is coming.I have to send this e-mail ahead of time beacause I can only surf the internet once a week(I'm a high school student.)
The heavy schoolwork makes me so busy that I can't have enough sleep.when I'm tired I' will read the story Falls Chance and that will make me feel better.To be sincere,this is the best English story I've ever read.You and Rolf are really great writer.
Wishing you all the blessings of a beautiful Christmas season.
请帮我检查和修改一下这封邮件（很短）,
英文句子中词语没有错误,只有个别地方有比较小的失误.
Christmas Day is coming.I have to send this e-mail ahead of it because I can only surf on the internet once a week( I am a high school student).
The heavy schoolwork makes me so busy that I can't have enough sleep.When I am tired I will read the story Falls Chance which will make me feel better.To be sincere,this is the best English story that I've ever read.You and Rolf are really great writers.
Wishing you all the blessings of a beautiful Christmas season.
请高手帮我修改一下这封英文邮件, 请高手帮我修改一下这封英文邮件,非常感谢! 帮我检查这封【短邮件】有没有什么语法错误 能帮我检查这封英文邮件的措辞和格式有没错误吗? 谁能帮我修改一下这封英语邮件, 英语写作 检查求高人帮我检查一下以下邮件内容,英文部分.若有错误请帮我修改一下.Hello,Dear Sir/Madam 几个句子 请帮我检查语法 和修改 > 请帮我检查和修改下英语作文吧 帮我检查、修改一下这篇英语作文 帮我检查和修改一下这一段英文自我介绍的结尾,谢谢 请帮我翻译一封德语邮件 谢谢! 请帮我翻译一封德语邮件 谢谢