英语高手可以帮我看一篇文章有什么语法或词汇错误吗?还能添加点什么吗?

英语高手可以帮我看一篇文章有什么语法或词汇错误吗?还能添加点什么吗?
When I recalled my summer life after College Entrance Examination,It was neither vivid nor extraordinary.But I just think it was simple but meaningful.
Mabey it was really dull for others to stay at home all day long .But for me ,I could do a lot of things about what I was interested .I read novel John-Chistophe and enjoy the deeply meaning of it.I liked to sit there just waiting for a moving movie at 22:00o^clock although I can do it by suffering the Internet .
To someone mabey tralling is enjoyable .To others ,they may have their own things to do .But I just like the feeling to stay with my parents and that is what I think the most imortant thing.

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When I recalled my summer life after College Entrance Examination,it (It)
was neither vivid nor extraordinary.But I just thought (think) it was simple
but meaningful.
it 这里不可以用大楷,因为句子未完(When...,...)
it was simple but meaningful没有问题
也可以考虑将意思改一改
例如
..it was meaningful because it was simple
时式方面
在这段及第二段我会倾向於用过去时
Maybe (Mabey) it was really dull for others to stay at home all day long
.But for me ,I could do a lot of things which interested me (about what
I was interested) .I read a novel by John Christophe (novel John-Chistophe)
and enjoyed (enjoy) the deep (deeply) meaning of it.I liked to sit there
just waiting for a moving movie at 22:00o^clock although I could (can)
do it by surfing (suffering) the Internet .
I could do a lot of things about what I was interested
interested 这样的用法会跟 in
例如
I was interested in reading.
因此以主动语法来用interest这个字
如果想大致上保留句子的原来‘去法’
可以用
I could do a lot of things in which I was interested
原文可能是提及John Christophe的‘一本’小说
因为后面有it这个代名词
所以加上了 a novel
waiting for a moving movie at 22:00o^clock
waiting for a late night moving movie
waiting for the 22:00 moving movie
I could (can) do it by surfing (suffering) the Internet .
I could have it by surfing the internet
这里好奇的想问一问
可留意到 do it 及 have it 在这里的分别吗?
To someone maybe (mabey) tralling is enjoyable .To others ,they may have
their own things to do .But I just like the feeling to stay with my parents
and that is what I think the most important (imortant) thing.
tralling的意思不明确
未能提供意见