请帮我检查下面的句子是否有什么问题?非常感谢!求助问题,他人可不答!

请帮我检查下面的句子是否有什么问题?非常感谢!求助问题,他人可不答!
1.他们利用我们求助无门的困境把我们公司接管了.
Taking advantage of the difficult condition that we have nobody to turn to,they took over our company.
2.虽然我们前面仍有困难,但我肯定我们中国人有智慧靠自己实现国家和平统一.
Despite the difficulties that we are facing,I am confident that we Chinese are sapiential enough to achieve peaceful reunification of China on our own.
3.只强调国内生产总值是错误的,它会引起很多严重的问题.
It is wrong to stress only gross domestic product(GDP),which will causse many serious problems.
4.他喜欢炫耀他的财富,但是这完全是徒劳的,人们仍然想躲避毒药一样躲避他.
He likes to show off his wealth,while it is vain,for people still avoid seeing him as if he is poison.
5.他不久就爱上了这个村子.他决心和村民一起把这个村子变成一个花园.
Soon,he fell in love with the village and determined to change it into a garden with villagers.
6.我们必须花更多的钱来和全球的气温上升作斗争.另外,我认为我们还必须采取严厉的法律措施.这不只是一个钱的问题.
We must spend more money to struggle against the inscreasing global temperature.Besides,I suppose we must take drastic legal measures.After all, it is not only a matter of money.
7.这个腐败的官员还在死死抓住他的权利不放.他拒绝靠边站.
The corrupt official is still seizing his power tightly and refused to stand aside.
8.她不时的偷偷朝他张望.她发现自己第一次这样看一个年轻的男子.
She peeps at him from time to time,finding that it is her first time to look at a man in such a way.

1. 注意前后时态的一致性.“接管”公司,是发生在“求助无门”之后的,后面都是 " took over" 了,那么the difficult condition that 的从句的的时态应该是发生在过去的过去的过去完成时.“the difficult condition that we had got nobody to turn to, they took over our company."

2. 正确.

3. only 的位置调整一下会更好,对.的强调,用stress on会比较妥当,"It is wrong only to stress on GDP." 注意一下cause的拼写,应该是打字的时候失误了.

4. 个人觉得like 后面跟动词—ing 的形式比较好,表示这是他的一个个人习惯.徒劳一般用 in vain. 用for 表示原因的时候,后面通常不跟句子,引导原因状语从句的通常是because, due to , for the reason that.最后as if 后面接过去时表示虚拟语气.所以这句话应该这样表达："He likes showing off his wealth, though it is in vain, because/ for the reason that people still avoid seeing him as if he were poison."

5. 这句话里,soon 放在句中会比较好." He was soon to fall in love with the village and determined to reform it into a garden with the villagers."

6. 在某物上花钱spend money on sth, 花钱做某事spend money in doing sth. " We must spend more money in struggling against the global temperature rise.Besides, I believe that we also have to take rigorous legal measures. After all, it is not just a matter of money."

7. 注意and 后面的时态,用了refused,那么意思就是之前是拒绝的,现在已经不拒绝了.前面已经用了现在进行时,也就是说他现在也是拒绝的,所以可以改成refuses.

8. 把finding 换成realizing 会更好." She peeps at him from time to time, realizing that it is the first time for her to look at a young man in such a way."

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