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This New Year is snowing all the time. I went to Zi Zhu Yuan Park on January 3rd.I had a great fun at there. And I took many photos. Let me show and tell you about it. When I entered the park, it was snow more and more heavily. First, I went to the engine. I saw the engine had frozen up. And I thing it was very compact. Then, I walked on the ice layer. It was so cool that I can’t recount it through my words. But next, I met a very dangerous problem. I was tramped the ice. My foot was submerged in the ice cave. Luckily, I pluck my foot on time as I was not fell thought the ice. Finally, tired but happy. I took the bus back to my home. What a memorable day! I can’t forget it. 请帮忙改一下作文，顺便加一些字数，谢谢
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It had been snowing all the time this New Year . I went to Zi Zhu Yuan Park on January 3rd.I had a good time there. And I took many photos. Let me tell you something about it. When I entered the park, it was snowing more and more heavily. First, I went to the engine. I saw the engine had frozen up. And I thought it was very compact. Then, I walked on the ice layer. It was so cool that I can’t recount it with my words. But next, I met a danger . I was trapped in the ice. My foot was submerged in the ice cave. Luckily, I plucked my foot on time and I did not fall into the ice. Finally, tired but happy. I took the bus back to my home. What a memorable day! I will not forget it.
最终答案：略
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It had been snowing all the time this New Year . I went to Zi Zhu Yuan Park on January 3rd.I had a good time there. And I took many photos. Let me tell you something about it. When I entered the park, it was snowing more and more heavily. First, I went to the engine. I saw the engine had frozen up. And I thought it was very compact. Then, I walked on the ice layer. It was so cool that I can’t recount it with my words. But next, I met a danger . I was trapped in the ice. My foot was submerged in the ice cave. Luckily, I plucked my foot on time and I did not fall into the ice. Finally, tired but happy. I took the bus back to my home. What a memorable day! I will not forget it.
最终答案：略