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英语作文帮忙改一改Thank you,my dear teachers and students
I am soon to be graduated.I like the school day.We are concerned about our teachers,as parents concerned about their child.The teachers are very helpful and patient's.When we ran into trouble,they always taught our patient,to help us.Each student teachers are fair.We have the friendship between the students is in the distillation of Dadanaonao out,although sometimes trouble is,but we are always friendly to get along with classmates.We have a lot of fun.
Thank you,my dear teachers and students.We are in the same classroom learning for 3 years.This is 3 years,how many tears,how many of laughter,I will never forget.Some of us will never forget the laughter.
英语作文帮忙改一改Thank you,my dear teachers and students
第二行 their child 应是their children
patient's 应是patient
第三行taught our patient 应是 taught us patiently
还有When we ran into trouble,they always taught our patient,to help us.这句话最好用一般现在时 ran——run taught——teach
Each student teachers are fair 这句话是说老师很公平吗?这样好一些:Teachers are fair to each student.
We have the friendship between the students is in the distillation of Dadanaonao out,although sometimes trouble is,but we are always friendly to get along with classmates.
这样好一些:We have strong friendship between each other.Although sometimes there is trouble,we are always getting along with classmates friendly.
although与but 不能连用
of laughter应是 laughters