搜狗做题网求高手来改改错啊~英语10个错误,顺便讲解一下
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求高手来改改错啊~英语10个错误,顺便讲解一下
My elder brother,whom is studying in college, argued with my mother this morning. He didn't want to be a dictor, my mother wanted him to study medicine.My mother thought she would heve a bright futur as adoctor.After study in college for several month, my brother decided to give up.He wanted to change his major and study what he was ture interested in.But my mother didn't want him to be a painter.She was afraid of that my brother would be poor in the future wheher he studied painting. However, my brother didn't give in.They argue for a long time.Could you tell me how my brother should do?
Sincerely yours,
Li Wei
My elder brother,whom is studying in college, argued with my mother this morning. He didn't want to be a dictor, my mother wanted him to study medicine.My mother thought she would heve a bright futur as adoctor.After study in college for several month, my brother decided to give up.He wanted to change his major and study what he was ture interested in.But my mother didn't want him to be a painter.She was afraid of that my brother would be poor in the future wheher he studied painting. However, my brother didn't give in.They argue for a long time.Could you tell me how my brother should do?
Sincerely yours,
Li Wei
真的只有十个错么?
whom应该是who吧,whom是用来作宾格的时候用的；
doctor拼错了吧；
she应该是he；
have也拼错了；
future也是拼错了；
study应该改成studying,动名词
month后面应该加s；
true应该改成truly,用副词修饰动词；
afraid后面of去掉,因为跟的是句子而不是名词或名词性词组；
wether改成if,条件状语从句；
argue后加d,过去时；
how 改成what,少主语；
最后落款应该是,yours ,换行,sincerely
我觉得正确的应该是：
My elder brother,who is studying in college,argued with my mother this morning.He didn't want to be a doctor,my mother wanted him to study medicine.My mother thought he would have a bright future as a doctor.After studying in college for several months,my brother decided to give up.He wanted to change his major and study what he was turly interested in.But my mother didn't want him to be a painter.She was afraid that my brother would be poor in the future if he studied painting.However,my brother didn't give in.They argued for a long time.Could you tell me what my brother should do?
yours,
Sincerely Li Wei
whom应该是who吧,whom是用来作宾格的时候用的；
doctor拼错了吧；
she应该是he；
have也拼错了；
future也是拼错了；
study应该改成studying,动名词
month后面应该加s；
true应该改成truly,用副词修饰动词；
afraid后面of去掉,因为跟的是句子而不是名词或名词性词组；
wether改成if,条件状语从句；
argue后加d,过去时；
how 改成what,少主语；
最后落款应该是,yours ,换行,sincerely
我觉得正确的应该是：
My elder brother,who is studying in college,argued with my mother this morning.He didn't want to be a doctor,my mother wanted him to study medicine.My mother thought he would have a bright future as a doctor.After studying in college for several months,my brother decided to give up.He wanted to change his major and study what he was turly interested in.But my mother didn't want him to be a painter.She was afraid that my brother would be poor in the future if he studied painting.However,my brother didn't give in.They argued for a long time.Could you tell me what my brother should do?
yours,
Sincerely Li Wei