英语句子改错 We came another suggestion.You should concentrate abo

英语句子改错
We came another suggestion.
You should concentrate about what the teacher says in class.
We should have positive attitude for life.
People are often mistaken in thinking that those with high IQs
always have high EQs as well as.
Do not read in the sun.It's not good to your eyes.
He desired that we can go there on time.
You can never imagine Peter sail across the Atlantic Ocean in only five days.
The man stood by the door is my father.
I drove all the way home,listened to music.
The teacher had her mouth wide open,surprising I got the answer.

We came another suggestion.
=>We came for another suggestion.
(用for 表目的)
You should concentrate about what the teacher says in class.
=>You should concentrate on what the teacher says in class.
（ concentrate on是固定用法“集中注意力于.”）
We should have positive attitude for life.
=>We should have a positive attitude for life.
(have a positive attitude for...也是固定说法“对.有一个积极的态度”)
People are often mistaken in thinking that those with high IQs always have high EQs as well as.
=>People are often mistaken in thinking that those with high IQs always have high EQs as well .
（as well as后面要接名词或者别的什么词,而 as well后就不用）
Do not read in the sun.It's not good to your eyes.
=>Do not read in the sun.It's not good for your eyes.
（be good for..."对.有好处"; be good to..."对……友好"）
He desired that we can go there on time.
=>He desired that we should go there on time.
(desire 和suggest,order,command等 一样,后面接的宾语从句的谓语动词要用should do,should 可以省略)
You can never imagine Peter sail across the Atlantic Ocean in only five days.
=>You can never imagine Peter sailing across the Atlantic Ocean in only five days.
（固定搭配 imagine (sb.) doing sth.）
The man stood by the door is my father.
=>The man standing by the door is my father.
（考查非谓语动词.the man 和stand 是主动关系,所以要用 doing 形式,即standing）
I drove all the way home,listened to music.
=>I drove all the way home,listening to music.
（考查非谓语动词.i 和listen 是主动关系,用doing 形式,即listening）
The teacher had her mouth wide open,surprising I got the answer.
=>The teacher had her mouth wide open,surprised at the fact that I got the answer.
（我们可以说sth.surprise sb.,或者sb.be surprised at sth.,这题的逻辑主语是the teacher,所以 用surprised ,但是surprise at (that) i got the answer 这种表达是不对的,因为介词后面不用that引导的宾语从句,所以我们可以加上the fact,此时的that i got the answer 是做the fact 的同位语从句.)