搜狗做题网请英语好的大神帮我完善修改
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请英语好的大神帮我完善修改
Everyone has diffident idea about salary and interest.Some people think it is important to be interest in his job.But some people think it is more important to have a handsome salary for a job.
As far as I am concerned,it is necessary and important to chose a job for a handsome salary.Because I think we can not live without money.Even thought money is not everything for us,but if we do not have money we will do nothing.You might think my thought is very vulgar,I n fact if you want to live a good life and help many people,you must be rich or capable person.So if your jod can bring you handsome salary,you can achieve some your goals.
On other hand,which one can take you more things,money or interes?Most person might think interest is impotant.In my opinion,a handsome salary can build up a interest for a job .so if let me chose a job,I will chose a job with a handsome salary .
All in all ,you can think me is a mammonish man.but I just can not live without moner .
Maybe I am stupid,I just become myself,this is the true me.
Everyone has diffident idea about salary and interest.Some people think it is important to be interest in his job.But some people think it is more important to have a handsome salary for a job.
As far as I am concerned,it is necessary and important to chose a job for a handsome salary.Because I think we can not live without money.Even thought money is not everything for us,but if we do not have money we will do nothing.You might think my thought is very vulgar,I n fact if you want to live a good life and help many people,you must be rich or capable person.So if your jod can bring you handsome salary,you can achieve some your goals.
On other hand,which one can take you more things,money or interes?Most person might think interest is impotant.In my opinion,a handsome salary can build up a interest for a job .so if let me chose a job,I will chose a job with a handsome salary .
All in all ,you can think me is a mammonish man.but I just can not live without moner .
Maybe I am stupid,I just become myself,this is the true me.
第二句 to be interested in 第二段eventhough 和but 不能同时用 把but去掉 we wil do nothing 改成 we can do nothing比较好 后面改成a capable person 还有 some of your goals 把some去掉
第三段 on another hand 不是other 后面 take you more things 改成 bring you more 就行了 interest for a job 里面 for改成on
第四段 think me 把is去掉 不能两个动词连用 I just want to be myself 不要用become
第三段 on another hand 不是other 后面 take you more things 改成 bring you more 就行了 interest for a job 里面 for改成on
第四段 think me 把is去掉 不能两个动词连用 I just want to be myself 不要用become