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老师请给我一片答案，不要标准答案，要考生写的。谢谢
解题思路： 叙述感想
解题过程：
Getting back what you have lost would be an unforgettable experience. Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on which my name was inscribed. Fortunately, it was returned. That morning, I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi, for I would be late for the final examination. On arriving at school, I headed to my classroom quickly, not noticing that I had left my cellphone on the back seat. When the exam ended, to my great surprise, I found the driver waiting at the school gate. He handed the phone over to me, wearing a smile on his face. So touched was I that tears rolled down my cheeks. From this story, I am firmly convinced of the significance of honesty, which will contribute to building a warm and harmonious society. “三段式作文法”中的第一段的质量直接关乎阅卷老师对该篇文章的第一印象。这篇作文可以采用“开门见山法”，直接通过“生活中，你自己或他人曾有物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历”这一常见现象引入文章话题。 如例文中，“Getting back what you have lost would be an unforgettable experience.” 然后，很自然地过渡到自己或他人也有类似的经历。如例文中，“Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on which my name was inscribed. Fortunately, it was returned.” 清晰表达出了记叙文 “When, Who, What”三大基本要素。其中，在写作专项训练上，“物品的描述” 可作为一个重点专题进行详细的研读，包括如何介绍物品的外形，产地以及特点等。 第二段，可采用“时间记叙法”描述物品失而复得的经过。如果不按照时间顺序行文，阅卷老师很难在短时间内看到文章的思路，甚至不知所云。例文中 “That morning ” “On arriving at school” “ When the exam ended”等标志词句，都清晰明了地展现了“时间记叙法”的行文思路，也使文章读起来更加流畅。在写作专项训练中，可重点学习如何写“连环画作文”（北京卷必考题型）的，针对“时间记叙法”，结合历年高考中的记叙文进行了大量的操练。 第三段，发表自己的感想，总结全文，升华主题。如例文中，“From this story”，自然过渡到第三段的感想。 “I am firmly convinced of the significance of honesty, which will contribute to building a warm and harmonious society.” 表达出自己通过“失而复得”的故事，体会到诚信对构建一个温馨和谐的社会有重要的作用。运用非限制性定语从句进行结尾能显示出较高的写作水平, 一定能受到阅卷老师们的青睐。 一篇文章好比一幢大厦，只有用严谨的结构做支撑，用丰富的内容做砖块，用精彩的语言做装饰，才能筑造出世界上最壮丽的建筑。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Getting back what you have lost would be an unforgettable experience. Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on which my name was inscribed. Fortunately, it was returned. That morning, I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi, for I would be late for the final examination. On arriving at school, I headed to my classroom quickly, not noticing that I had left my cellphone on the back seat. When the exam ended, to my great surprise, I found the driver waiting at the school gate. He handed the phone over to me, wearing a smile on his face. So touched was I that tears rolled down my cheeks. From this story, I am firmly convinced of the significance of honesty, which will contribute to building a warm and harmonious society. “三段式作文法”中的第一段的质量直接关乎阅卷老师对该篇文章的第一印象。这篇作文可以采用“开门见山法”，直接通过“生活中，你自己或他人曾有物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历”这一常见现象引入文章话题。 如例文中，“Getting back what you have lost would be an unforgettable experience.” 然后，很自然地过渡到自己或他人也有类似的经历。如例文中，“Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on which my name was inscribed. Fortunately, it was returned.” 清晰表达出了记叙文 “When, Who, What”三大基本要素。其中，在写作专项训练上，“物品的描述” 可作为一个重点专题进行详细的研读，包括如何介绍物品的外形，产地以及特点等。 第二段，可采用“时间记叙法”描述物品失而复得的经过。如果不按照时间顺序行文，阅卷老师很难在短时间内看到文章的思路，甚至不知所云。例文中 “That morning ” “On arriving at school” “ When the exam ended”等标志词句，都清晰明了地展现了“时间记叙法”的行文思路，也使文章读起来更加流畅。在写作专项训练中，可重点学习如何写“连环画作文”（北京卷必考题型）的，针对“时间记叙法”，结合历年高考中的记叙文进行了大量的操练。 第三段，发表自己的感想，总结全文，升华主题。如例文中，“From this story”，自然过渡到第三段的感想。 “I am firmly convinced of the significance of honesty, which will contribute to building a warm and harmonious society.” 表达出自己通过“失而复得”的故事，体会到诚信对构建一个温馨和谐的社会有重要的作用。运用非限制性定语从句进行结尾能显示出较高的写作水平, 一定能受到阅卷老师们的青睐。 一篇文章好比一幢大厦，只有用严谨的结构做支撑，用丰富的内容做砖块，用精彩的语言做装饰，才能筑造出世界上最壮丽的建筑。
最终答案：略