搜狗做题网这篇英语作文写得怎么样?
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这篇英语作文写得怎么样?
这篇作文是哪个层次的水平?有什么缺点?就摘录了几段
Introduction
I live in a very old country which has 5000 years history-China.
I’m 13 and I’m a student in No.12 Middle School of Shanxi,Taiyuan.I’m in Grade 1,Class 10,and I love my class.
I have many pen pals in different countries.Ben is from U.S.He’s a very handsome boy.Lily is from Japan,she’s very good-looking but a little bit shy.My best friend,Jerry.A very tall boy from Tianjin,he’s 15 years old,I often play computer games with him,we’re all happy.
Every morning,I like to take a work in the park,but now I can’t,because I have to go to school early.
这篇作文是哪个层次的水平?有什么缺点?就摘录了几段
Introduction
I live in a very old country which has 5000 years history-China.
I’m 13 and I’m a student in No.12 Middle School of Shanxi,Taiyuan.I’m in Grade 1,Class 10,and I love my class.
I have many pen pals in different countries.Ben is from U.S.He’s a very handsome boy.Lily is from Japan,she’s very good-looking but a little bit shy.My best friend,Jerry.A very tall boy from Tianjin,he’s 15 years old,I often play computer games with him,we’re all happy.
Every morning,I like to take a work in the park,but now I can’t,because I have to go to school early.
I live in a very old country which has 5000 years history-China.
应该是5000 of years...
My best friend,Jerry.A very tall boy from Tianjin,
应该是my best friend,Jerry,is a .He is 15 years old.
I like to take a work in the park
work应该改成walk
这篇文章语法有问题,请多做一些语法练习,来提高写作能力
应该是5000 of years...
My best friend,Jerry.A very tall boy from Tianjin,
应该是my best friend,Jerry,is a .He is 15 years old.
I like to take a work in the park
work应该改成walk
这篇文章语法有问题,请多做一些语法练习,来提高写作能力