我写的英语作文,英语不好,东拼西凑的,不要笑话我~

我写的英语作文,英语不好,东拼西凑的,不要笑话我~
As is vividly depicted in the picture above,a lovely American girl in traditional Chinese costume with a charming smile on her face.There is no doubt that this new dress becomes her very well and has added oriental glamour to her beautiful features.It is obvious that Chinese culture is enjoying a striking popularity among the foreigner.
The nation is the world.As a result of our open-doll policy,more and more foreigners visit China and become interested in our richness and charm national culture .Furthermore,many of them even rooted in China and turns to real "Chinese",they can speak mandarin well,cook Chinese food ,sing Bejing opera and even have KongFu!
There is no reason to make a fuss about this phenomenon.On the one hand,we are living in an age when economic globalization is not only heard over the media,but also seen and felt in the reality of our daily life.International culture exchanges have become more and more frequent,which is inevitably improving our mutual understanding and friendship with other countries.On the other hand,it results from our great achievement during the last two decades,such as the accession to WTO,the successful launching of Chang'e No.1 lunar satellite,especially Beijing's successful hosting of the 2008 Olympic Games and so forth.How can one resist being appealed to such an energetic nation with an increasingly significant status as well as a long and colorful culture?

As is vividly depicted in the picture above,a lovely American girl is(少谓语)in the(加the)traditional Chinese costume with a charming smile on her face.There is no doubt that this new dress makes her have a better appearance 原文改掉and has added oriental glamour to her beautiful features.It is obvious that Chinese culture is enjoying a striking popularity among the foreigners用复数.
The nation is the world.As a result of our open-door policy(应该是open-door policy),more and more foreigners visit China and become interested in our rich and charming都用形容词 national culture .Furthermore,many of them even root in China and turn to real "Chinese"时态和单复数改下,they can speak mandarin well,cook Chinese food ,sing Beijing opera and even know KongFu!"(have KongFu有点中式了)
There is no reason to make a fuss about this phenomenon.On the one hand,we are living in an age when economic globalization is not only heard over the media,but also seen and felt in the reality of our daily life.International culture exchange 交流,不可数has become more and more frequent,which is inevitably improving our mutual understanding and friendship with other countries.On the other hand,it results from our great achievement during the last two decades,such as the accession to WTO,the successful launching of Chang'e No.1 lunar satellite,especially Beijing's successful hosting of the 2008 Olympic Games and so forth.How can one resist being appealed to such an energetic nation with an increasingly significant status as well as a long and colorful culture?