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English英语这段话有错吗?We'll hold a summer camp and a teacher is wa

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这段话有错吗?
We'll hold a summer camp and a teacher is wanted now.
Do you age from 18 to 25 years?If your ranging in age from 18 to 25 years will join us.Do you good at singing?Can you dance?Can you speak English?Can you help children with swim?Are you a woman?If you meet the above conditions join us!
If you get quite well with children and believe you are the one for us,please contact us with tel:88456911.
English英语这段话有错吗?We'll hold a summer camp and a teacher is wa
我觉得第二句话和第三句话比较啰嗦,意思重复了.
第四句应该是Are you good at.be good at sth.这句话 Do用错了.
Can you help children with swim.这句话最好改成help sb.(to)do sth.或者help sb.in doing sth.的巨型.
其他没什么问题,就是连着几个Can you...还有很多个If you...换换句型会更好,比如用虚拟语气啊之类的表示,或者直接用陈述句叙述条件.