请各位大侠帮忙英语改错

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请各位大侠帮忙英语改错
Autum comes
It is cooling day after day and the daytime is shorter day after day.It a sign that autumn is coming.In guangdong,the swings between the seasons are not obvious.By winter,there is no ice and snow; and by autumn,there are no leaves fall from the tree.After a score or more days the Mid-autumn Festival will come.The year has gone more than a half.And what I did?what I have?I have nothing except the undefeated spirit.It is enough.
以上这段,估计有很多错误.求助各位大侠能不能帮我指出哪里有错并怎么改?

it is COLDER day after day and the daytime is shorter day after day.It'S a sign that autumn is coming.In GuangDong,the swing (考虑用用看change) between (不用the) seasons are not obvious.IN winter,there is no ice and snow; IN autumn,there are no leaves fallING from the treeS.AFTER DAYS,the Mid-Autumn Festival will come.More than half of the year is gone and (不会用and做开头) what DID I DO?What DO I have?I have nothing BUT the undefeated spirit.However (比较顺) it is enough.

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