帮助修改一篇英语演讲Reading&Traveling

帮助修改一篇英语演讲Reading&Traveling
Well,I think modern life is impossible without traveling. For me, there are two kinds of traveling. On the one hand, traveling on foot brings me many benefits. It can make me enjoy my holidays and many different life styles; it can broaden my vision, let me learn more about other countries or cultures. On the other hand, reading is another kind of traveling. It can bring me to the places where I can not go for the time being. Books are the best friends of human being. Books make my eyes and imagination enjoy the beautiful scenes through writers’ wonderful description. The european has an old saying:Reading makes a full man.
When I was a little child, I looked forward to the books.My father bought me a pretty story book with a lot of colorful pictures called Little Prince on my seventh birthday. I was really excited at that time. I enjoyed it on the bed and had the most beautiful dream in the world that night. From then on I fell in love with reading. A few years later, I had remebered the little red ,snow white,the malicious queen and some other special roles.It seem to experience a fairy tale on my trvaling of life.
Reading just like enjoying the sunshine. Don’t you agree?
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另外帮忙想一个或找一个适合演讲的结尾好吗?
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改错部分：
1.On the other hand,reading is another kind of traveling.It can bring me to the places where I can not go for the time being.
这里的for the time being最好改为before,楼主这样写犯了一个句式杂糅的毛病,最好不要这么写.
2.I enjoyed it on the bed and had the most beautiful dream in the world that night.
that night前面最好加个介词at
3.A few years later,I had remebered the little red ,snow white,the malicious queen and some other special roles.It seem to experience a fairy tale on my trvaling of life.
这里不可以用过去完成时,因为这里没有明显的时间提示,要用现在完成时.
4.总评：写得很好哦,语言很流利,表达的也很清楚,最大的优点在于句式很丰富,条理很清楚!加油!
关于结尾：
So,what do you think about reading and traveling?Do you enjoy joining a trip with so many good books?If you say yes,please follow me,I'll wait for you and share the happiness of reading books with everybody!
That's all,thank you!