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My friend I have many friengs, but WangYi is my best friend. She is very kind , lovely. She ia also 12 years old. In her spare time,she likes to listen to music and reading book . She helps me with so many things. introduces him self Hello everyone!My name is WangRuiLin .I was twelve .I am a girl. I was born in march 1999 in the mentougou distinct a happy home. My specialty is playing the clarinet,playing taek wondo.
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My friend
I have many friengs (friends) , but WangYi (Wang Yi) is my best friend. She is very kind , (把逗号改为and) lovely. She ia (is) also 12 years old. In her spare time,she likes to listen (listening) to music and reading book (books). She helps me with so many things.
introduces him self (Introduce myself)
Hello (,) everyone! My name is WangRuiLin (Wang Ruilin) .I was (am) twelve .I am a girl. I was born in march 1999 in the mentougou distinct a happy home (I am from a happy family. I was born in Mentougou District in March, 1999.) My specialty is playing the clarinet, (把逗号改为and) playing taek wondo.
同学您好，两篇作文写得还都不错，基本能够表达意思，请注意划线部分是有毛病的，括号中是修改的。继续加油！
最终答案：略
解题过程：
My friend
I have many friengs (friends) , but WangYi (Wang Yi) is my best friend. She is very kind , (把逗号改为and) lovely. She ia (is) also 12 years old. In her spare time,she likes to listen (listening) to music and reading book (books). She helps me with so many things.
introduces him self (Introduce myself)
Hello (,) everyone! My name is WangRuiLin (Wang Ruilin) .I was (am) twelve .I am a girl. I was born in march 1999 in the mentougou distinct a happy home (I am from a happy family. I was born in Mentougou District in March, 1999.) My specialty is playing the clarinet, (把逗号改为and) playing taek wondo.
同学您好，两篇作文写得还都不错，基本能够表达意思，请注意划线部分是有毛病的，括号中是修改的。继续加油！
最终答案：略