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On this holiday,I saw a good film “V for Vendetta”.This is the third time I saw it.The story were to happen in the future of London,which would become a autocratic country.The male lead --V used to be a guinea pig for biochemistry experiment for their government.In a fire accident,he has escaped and hid underground to prepare for vendetta.A few years later,he succeed in waking up the people who were controlled by the government.The film plays well produce and the pictures are beautiful,.The male lead is smart ,bravery,and talent.The film told us that people shouldn’t afraid of the government,on the contrary,the government should afraid of the people.Besides,in the film,there is a touching love story between V and Evey.To my impressed,when V refused Evey to throw off his mask,he said,There is a face beneath this mask,but it is not me.I am no more that face than I am the muscles beneath it or the bonds beneath them.
On this holiday,I saw a good film “V for Vendetta”.This is the third time I saw it.The story were to happen in the future of London,which would become a autocratic country.The male lead --V used to be a guinea pig for biochemistry experiment for their government.In a fire accident,he has escaped and hid underground to prepare for vendetta.A few years later,he succeed in waking up the people who were controlled by the government.The film plays well produce and the pictures are beautiful,.The male lead is smart ,bravery,and talent.The film told us that people shouldn’t afraid of the government,on the contrary,the government should afraid of the people.Besides,in the film,there is a touching love story between V and Evey.To my impressed,when V refused Evey to throw off his mask,he said,There is a face beneath this mask,but it is not me.I am no more that face than I am the muscles beneath it or the bonds beneath them.
1 分一下段The film plays well produce and the pictures are beautiful,.前为一段讲影片内容,后面一段你的感想
2错误 The film told us that people shouldn’t （少了be) afraid of the government,on the contrary,the government should afraid(少了be ) of the people.
整体上写地很好啊~
2错误 The film told us that people shouldn’t （少了be) afraid of the government,on the contrary,the government should afraid(少了be ) of the people.
整体上写地很好啊~