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Our sports meeting Every autumn our school helds a sports meeting。This year is last year for us and today (我想写“我们尽力了”)!We want to win,we try our best to win。(我们没有后悔) I ran the 100m race。It’s not easy to win,although I got the first last year,but my leg hurt。When I was standing on the beginning line,I felt nervous。I heard my classmates’ sound ,I cried。I can’t say out why I cried,I don’t want to feel sorry。So,I heard a sound from my heart“Never say die”......The starting gun make a sound,I ran to the finishing line。(冲出终点线)I felt happy。 Today,many classmates tried their best。In my heart,we won the game。Come on everyone 。For the last sports meeting,we are the best! 老师我这篇文章有点字数不足,可以适当帮我加点内容。
夜深了。改作文英语的
解题思路: 注意英语文章的标点及中英文之间的区别
解题过程:
Our sports meeting
Every autumn our school helds a sports meeting。It is the last time for us to join in the sports meeting this year.So we tried our best to win today .(用这两个句子代替说明你要表达的意思较好)
I ran the 100m race。It’s not easy to win.Although I got the first last year, my leg hurt this year (Although 和but不连用) .When I was standing on the beginning line,I felt nervous. While I heard my classmates’ sound ,I cried.(注意英语连词及句号的用法)I didn't know (注意少些中式英语)why I cried.I din’t want to feel sorry.But I heard a sound in my heart“Never give up ”.(用介词in更好,根据意思用不放弃号)After the starting gun was fired ,I ran to the finishing line.I was the first to pass it.(我第一个通过终点线)I felt happy。
Today many classmates tried their best。But we won the game。Come on everyone 。For the last sports meeting,we were the best!If we study hard ,we will be the best !
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