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谁能帮我改下四级作文,
during these years,we know that more more students didi not give much attention to spelling.of course it is not onlychildren's faults.as exam developed,the only way to be admitted to university.students have to put more foucus on resulis,not what they really bnow about.at the age od 21 century,listenning and reading are almost 60 % of the english test.however,there is nothing serious about spelling in the examination.when you are reading,you just understand words.when you are listenning,you just known about pronunciation.so a great number of english works you have done ,the more scores you want to get.the more emphaises will be on reading,not spelling.for exchanging this state of learning.i suppose we should transform our diligence to intersts.
看哈能打多少分啊 应该以后怎么改进呢 是MORE AND MORE多有打字错误 请多多谅解
during these years,we know that more more students didi not give much attention to spelling.of course it is not onlychildren's faults.as exam developed,the only way to be admitted to university.students have to put more foucus on resulis,not what they really bnow about.at the age od 21 century,listenning and reading are almost 60 % of the english test.however,there is nothing serious about spelling in the examination.when you are reading,you just understand words.when you are listenning,you just known about pronunciation.so a great number of english works you have done ,the more scores you want to get.the more emphaises will be on reading,not spelling.for exchanging this state of learning.i suppose we should transform our diligence to intersts.
看哈能打多少分啊 应该以后怎么改进呢 是MORE AND MORE多有打字错误 请多多谅解
【As is known to all】,【 more and more students donn't give much attention to spelling,nowadays.】 of course it is not only 【the】children's faults.【Passing an exam is】the only way to be admitted to university.Students have to 【foucus more】 on 【results】【than on 】what they really 【want to】know .【In the】 【21st 】century,listenning and reading are almost 60 % of the english test.however,【spelling is always ignored】in 【an】 examination.when you are reading,you just understand words.when you are listenning,you just known about pronunciation.so a great number of english works you have done ,the more scores you want to get.the more emphaises will be on reading,not spelling.for exchanging this state of learning.i suppose we should transform our diligence to intersts.
根据你的表达方式改了一些硬伤,后面的改不下去了
四级作文其实很简单,主题明确,层次清晰
如果再加上表达顺畅的话,拿高分不是问题
这篇文章没有提出明确的观点,论述中也没有呼应主题
层次混乱,想一句写一句,拼写和语法错误也很多
如果我是老师,满分十分的话,可以给你三分辛苦分.
说的可能有点狠了,不过好好练的话,你很容易进步!
最后,这篇文章可以这样改：
第一句指出一种现象,紧接着需要明确表达自己的观点（无非是强调拼写的重要性）；
文章的主题部分可以分层次论述
如：忽视拼写的危害,拼写的重要性,如何改进等等
最后呼应主题,号召大家重视拼写!
根据你的表达方式改了一些硬伤,后面的改不下去了
四级作文其实很简单,主题明确,层次清晰
如果再加上表达顺畅的话,拿高分不是问题
这篇文章没有提出明确的观点,论述中也没有呼应主题
层次混乱,想一句写一句,拼写和语法错误也很多
如果我是老师,满分十分的话,可以给你三分辛苦分.
说的可能有点狠了,不过好好练的话,你很容易进步!
最后,这篇文章可以这样改：
第一句指出一种现象,紧接着需要明确表达自己的观点（无非是强调拼写的重要性）；
文章的主题部分可以分层次论述
如：忽视拼写的危害,拼写的重要性,如何改进等等
最后呼应主题,号召大家重视拼写!