可否帮助检查一下这篇作文中的语法错误?
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可否帮助检查一下这篇作文中的语法错误?
First of all,I will put a riddle to you:What do you think thething which has most dreams on it?Yea,it is bed.
Today,I will talk about my bed,one of thefurnitures at my home and I use it every day.I am a girl who loves to sleep,even in the daytime,I am also feel sleepy so I am really love my bed in myhome not in dormitory.My bed is green -and -yellow.In the head of the bed’shas a rectangular grid,so I can hold a lot of things like English tapes andreread machine.I think my bed is very loyalty.My bed work tirelessly and madethe great contribution for my study and rest.When I return home,every day Iam very tired and my bed it seem says to me:"Little Master,come to rest,come to rest." It is already commonplace.My bed is loyalty,right?
I love my bed!
First of all,I will put a riddle to you:What do you think thething which has most dreams on it?Yea,it is bed.
Today,I will talk about my bed,one of thefurnitures at my home and I use it every day.I am a girl who loves to sleep,even in the daytime,I am also feel sleepy so I am really love my bed in myhome not in dormitory.My bed is green -and -yellow.In the head of the bed’shas a rectangular grid,so I can hold a lot of things like English tapes andreread machine.I think my bed is very loyalty.My bed work tirelessly and madethe great contribution for my study and rest.When I return home,every day Iam very tired and my bed it seem says to me:"Little Master,come to rest,come to rest." It is already commonplace.My bed is loyalty,right?
I love my bed!
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大致批改了下
![](http://img.wesiedu.com/upload/4/d2/4d2a0d1daae350db08eecc3b36c78586.jpg)
这单词拼写不能偷懒
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最后是分数
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再问: 天哪! 太厉害了 这是什么软件吗?还是人工的?
再答: 大学的批改网,帮你弄了下。www.pigai.org能用就用吧。估计用不了。