搜狗做题网帮我看看我这样改动一下翻译有没有问题?
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帮我看看我这样改动一下翻译有没有问题?
此背景图片仅作为LOGO应用效果的示例样本,请避免用于商业展示.
The background picture is only a sample for the purpose of LOGO demonstration and presentation, Please be noticed that any commercial exhibition with this picture is avoided.
只要帮忙看一下有么没有语法或单词问题,或者有没有太重复罗嗦的部分,不用重新翻译……还有避免使用太强硬的否定(“不允许”和“避免”还是有区别的),所以no、not和don't都不要出现,谢谢.
最新的版本,再帮忙看一下：
The background picture is only an application sample for the purpose of LOGO demonstration & presentation, It should be noted that any commercial exhibition with this picture is avoided.
此背景图片仅作为LOGO应用效果的示例样本,请避免用于商业展示.
The background picture is only a sample for the purpose of LOGO demonstration and presentation, Please be noticed that any commercial exhibition with this picture is avoided.
只要帮忙看一下有么没有语法或单词问题,或者有没有太重复罗嗦的部分,不用重新翻译……还有避免使用太强硬的否定(“不允许”和“避免”还是有区别的),所以no、not和don't都不要出现,谢谢.
最新的版本,再帮忙看一下：
The background picture is only an application sample for the purpose of LOGO demonstration & presentation, It should be noted that any commercial exhibition with this picture is avoided.
我会这样翻译：
This background picture is only used as a sample to present the application effect of the LOGO.
Do not use it for any commercial exhibition.
改动的话：
第一句话OK的
第二句：Please notice that any commercial exhibition with this picture should be avoided.
notice用主动语态；“请避免”可以写成should be avoided
This background picture is only used as a sample to present the application effect of the LOGO.
Do not use it for any commercial exhibition.
改动的话：
第一句话OK的
第二句：Please notice that any commercial exhibition with this picture should be avoided.
notice用主动语态；“请避免”可以写成should be avoided