求人帮看英语情诗After the first sightI always hund on you in the mid

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求人帮看英语情诗
After the first sight
I always hund on you in the midnight in my dream
hard to fall a sleep
本人英文盲,求改语错,并且写一下感想.有真情实感可加分.最好用英语thanks you

精神可嘉啊!我从来没给我对象写过情诗,连中文的也没写过.
我看了你写的这三句,每一句意思都明确,但是需要做一些补充来衔接前后句的意思,否则就太孤立了让人看不懂整个意思.
鄙人不才,给你的小诗稍作改动,同时按照1,3,和2,4句尾押韵.
after falling in love with you on the first sight,
i always see you in the heaven of my dream.
oh it's hard to fall asleep without you being by my side.
even the wind feels so lonely in the cuddle of the moonbeam.
中文意思就是：
自从我第一眼爱上了你,
梦里从此有了你的身影.
啊,没有你的陪伴我难以入眠
风儿也会感到孤独,即使它有月光的拥慰.
试着瞎翻译成了“文言文”：
钟情倾心于一瞥,
梦里望汝得能见.
伊人撩思枕难眠,
月伴风亦孤独夜.
个人感想嘛.
love is so powerful that it can make a person take over the whole of my soul,love is painfule,it‘ll hurt so much if she does't respond my call of love.love is so easy,a simple smile can make me happy all day.爱是如此强大,它可以占据w我灵魂的全部；爱是痛苦的,没有回应的爱会深深刺痛我的心；爱又是如此简单,一个简单的微笑就能让我快乐一整天.
楼主你要是追加分数我就更爱你了.

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