哪个英语大神,帮我看下我的英语简历有什么错误,本人英语渣渣 方便的话,给我提提意见.

哪个英语大神,帮我看下我的英语简历有什么错误,本人英语渣渣 方便的话,给我提提意见.
Name:
phone number:
E-mail:
Marital Status:Single.Origin:Fujian
Sex:Male
Ethnicity :Han
Political background:member of Communist Youth League
Graduation School:
Education:University diploma
Specialty:software engineering
Employment intention:MCU development 、Electronic engineer
Learning experience:
1、Have been learning、Circuit analysis、Digital circuit 、Analog circuit
2、Master Single chip technology
3、In the C language programming environment using 51,52 MCU and LCD display water lights,digital tube display ,text ,images ,digital clock ,calendar and other functions
4、Buy their own STM32 development board to strengthen to graduate into society and employment.
5、Self taught Altium Designer 6.9
Self introduction:
I have the best ability to learn,good at learning new knowledge ,in facing up to challenges ;honest and credible ,pro-active work,to treat a serious and responsible work;optimistic ,cheerful personality,in the team are friendly and can communicate well with others,coordinated and completed Objectives.
Is the so-called learn in order to practise,wish your company give me a chance ,let me get more improvement during the work ,I will do our best to service for the company ,do a competent staff.
Finally ,once again express my sincerest thanks to you I did not take up too much of your valuable time ,waiting for your reply!

天,这简历是给外国人看的还是给中国人看的?
origin和ethnicity不要写.政治背景也不用谢.Address我不确定需不需要.Education要作为专门一栏分开写.大学学历是bachelor degree,专业是major,你的毕业时间以及毕业学校都要写在education下面.然后如果你有working experience的话也很重要,要写上.想要的职位要在简历前面写,叫做objective,然后写一下你为什么想要这个工作.然后learning experience应该叫skill或者你可以更specific一点儿分类成computer skill,communication skill之类的,然后写下来你学过的电脑技术.Resume里面不需要自我介绍的,尽量简介的陈述事实,说重点.你的美好人格也可以写在skill里面.英文上,确实不太好改,我不太确定你在说什么,总之最后建议不要用翻译器直接翻译.
完全不理解现在找工作怎么还需要英文简历了.工作的时候不还是的汉语交流么,老板们都这么拽了么...
再问： 即将毕业的学生，英语很渣，不好意思叫大神直接帮我翻译，只能我用翻译器翻译出来，然后拿出来让别人修改一下。不知道老板拽不拽，但是有前辈叫我英文简历也做一下，没办法只好出此下策。
再答： 还是找英语系的老师或者同学帮忙看一下吧。一般老板哪有需要英文简历的，若真看了还是专业点儿的好。