老师帮我改下歌词

如果你渴求一滴水 我愿意倾其一片海 如果你要摘一片红叶 我给你整个枫林和云彩
If you desire a drop of water, I would give you the sea
If you want a red leaf, I give you the whole maple woods and the clouds.
如果你要一个微笑 我敞开火热的胸怀 如果你需要有人同行 我陪你走到未来
If you need a smile, I would give you my warm heart,
If you need someone to travel together, I would be the one for the rest of your life
春暖花开 这是我的世界 每次怒放 都是心中喷发的爱
Blossoms in Spring, this is my world
Every blossoming is the love from the bottom of my heart
风儿吹来 是我和天空的对白 微弱的声音 唱出我最执着的期待
Breeze in my face, it’s the voice from the sky
Whisper like this, is my clinging wait in hope
春暖花开 这是我的世界 生命如水 有时平静 有时澎湃
Blossoms in Spring, this is my world
Life is like water, at times quiet, at times also surgent
穿越阴霾 阳光洒满你窗台 其实幸福 一直与我们同在
Through the haze, is the sunshine full of your sill
As you know, happiness is staying with us all the time
如果你要一个微笑 我敞开火热的胸怀 如果你需要有人同行 我陪你走到未来
If you need a smile, I would give you my warm heart,
If you need someone to travel together, I would be the one for the rest of your life
春暖花开 这是我的世界 每次怒放 都是心中喷发的爱
Blossoms in Spring, this is my world
Every blossoming is the love from the bottom of my heart
风儿吹来 是我和天空的对白 其实幸福 一直与我们同在
Breeze in my face, it’s the voice from the sky
As you know, happiness is staying with us all the time
春暖花开 这是我的世界 生命如水 有时平静 有时澎湃
Blossoms in Spring, this is my world
Life is like water, at times quiet, at times also surgent
穿越阴霾 阳光洒满你窗台 其实幸福 一直与我们同在
Through the haze, is the sunshine full of your sill
As you know, happiness is staying with us all the time
我的世界 春暖花开
This is my world, blossoms in Spring
我想唱这首歌，英文的，先把它的词给弄好。（这是网上找的）请老师帮我改下、唱歌用，呵呵 :-)

解题思路： 如下
解题过程：
同学，你好，老师已经看过这个歌词了。翻译得非常准确，无需改正。
最终答案：略