搜狗做题网请各位高手帮我修改一下这篇英语短文,这是一篇有关于招聘教师的短文.
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请各位高手帮我修改一下这篇英语短文,这是一篇有关于招聘教师的短文.
假如你是一位中学校长,需要招聘一名教师,具体条件如下：1、能吃苦耐劳 2、喜欢孩子 3、会说英语和法语 4、回唱歌和跳舞 5、会弹奏某种乐器.
联系电话：536—3215 联系人：Mr smith
Please attention,I am a hua xing medium school's headmaster.I want to recruit a teacher.
First,you can hard working and you must like children.Then,you can speak English and French.Next,you can sing and dance.Finally,you can play some instruments.If you can do this thing.you will have change to be a teacher.
Wish you can success!
If you are interesting in ,you can call at 536—3215 to Mr smith
本人写的不太好,如果可以的话,也可以写一篇.让我参考或借鉴.
假如你是一位中学校长,需要招聘一名教师,具体条件如下：1、能吃苦耐劳 2、喜欢孩子 3、会说英语和法语 4、回唱歌和跳舞 5、会弹奏某种乐器.
联系电话：536—3215 联系人：Mr smith
Please attention,I am a hua xing medium school's headmaster.I want to recruit a teacher.
First,you can hard working and you must like children.Then,you can speak English and French.Next,you can sing and dance.Finally,you can play some instruments.If you can do this thing.you will have change to be a teacher.
Wish you can success!
If you are interesting in ,you can call at 536—3215 to Mr smith
本人写的不太好,如果可以的话,也可以写一篇.让我参考或借鉴.
I am a hua xing medium school's headmaster.冠词a多余,后面表语已经是专有的,你见过说I am a Jim的吗,没有吧.另外medium是中号的,不对,应用middle.
you can hard working and you must like children. hard-working是一个合成词,词性为形容词.另外用can也不合适,用 you must work hard相对合适一点.
另外,第二段那一大堆can用的都不好,关键是我要求你需要怎么样,而不是你已经能怎么样.you need to/must be able to .更合适一点.
If you can do this thing.你前文说了那么多,最后怎么只是一个this thing.应该是these things吧,或者all of these.
you will have change to be a teacher.首先我不知道是不是你打错了,但这句话前应该是逗号,必须是逗号.另外这里我认为你想说的是chance而不是change,而且chance前必须要有冠词,
Wish you can success!把can去掉,wish you success就得了.
If you are interesting in.应该是interested...
you can hard working and you must like children. hard-working是一个合成词,词性为形容词.另外用can也不合适,用 you must work hard相对合适一点.
另外,第二段那一大堆can用的都不好,关键是我要求你需要怎么样,而不是你已经能怎么样.you need to/must be able to .更合适一点.
If you can do this thing.你前文说了那么多,最后怎么只是一个this thing.应该是these things吧,或者all of these.
you will have change to be a teacher.首先我不知道是不是你打错了,但这句话前应该是逗号,必须是逗号.另外这里我认为你想说的是chance而不是change,而且chance前必须要有冠词,
Wish you can success!把can去掉,wish you success就得了.
If you are interesting in.应该是interested...