搜狗做题网帮我看一下下面这段话有没有语法错误
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帮我看一下下面这段话有没有语法错误
When I get to the America,firstly I’ll say “Hello my name is Sam,I’m from China.It’s nice to meet you.”.
If he/she asks me my age,I’ll say ”I’m a 13-year-old boy.”
If he/she asks me my hobby,I’ll say “I sometimes play the piano,but I think I can't play it very well,and I practice writing with a china brush four or five times a week,too”
If he/she don’t know the CHINA BRUSH,just tell them it’s a very old writing tools,Chinese people used it 2000 to 1000 years ago,and we write the words on a Rice paper.
If he/she don’t know the RICE PAPER just tell them Rice paper originated in the Tang Dynasty and the feature of the RICE PAPER is soft,fountain ink and durability.It made of a kind of tree,but I don’t know the name of it.
When I get to the America,firstly I’ll say “Hello my name is Sam,I’m from China.It’s nice to meet you.”.
If he/she asks me my age,I’ll say ”I’m a 13-year-old boy.”
If he/she asks me my hobby,I’ll say “I sometimes play the piano,but I think I can't play it very well,and I practice writing with a china brush four or five times a week,too”
If he/she don’t know the CHINA BRUSH,just tell them it’s a very old writing tools,Chinese people used it 2000 to 1000 years ago,and we write the words on a Rice paper.
If he/she don’t know the RICE PAPER just tell them Rice paper originated in the Tang Dynasty and the feature of the RICE PAPER is soft,fountain ink and durability.It made of a kind of tree,but I don’t know the name of it.
1.文字输入,请在英文标点后加空格再继续输入才是符合规范的.
2.你这是一篇作文么?America 前不用加 The 了,因为就只有一个美国,不用特指了.
第一段的I’ll say…,没有交代是对谁说,感觉很奇怪.
3.If he/she asked…这里用被动语态来表达会更好,避免了he/she 的不确定性【用 they 也不错~】,还能说得更清楚,因为这里的重点是我.可以改成：When asked about my hobbies,I will anwser,……
4.还有第二个 China brush 前也不用加 The.just tell them……这里的主语 I 不应该省略掉.用 I will ……会更好.the words 前不加 The ,不是特指某个词语,所以也不用加.
5.“just tell them Rice paper originated in the Tang Dynasty” paper 后加 is .
“is soft,fountain ink and durability” 这里除了柔软,后面两个词应该改成形容词性.soft,XX and durable.墨水会晕开没时间帮你查啦,你百度下~
it made 之间加 is .
2.你这是一篇作文么?America 前不用加 The 了,因为就只有一个美国,不用特指了.
第一段的I’ll say…,没有交代是对谁说,感觉很奇怪.
3.If he/she asked…这里用被动语态来表达会更好,避免了he/she 的不确定性【用 they 也不错~】,还能说得更清楚,因为这里的重点是我.可以改成：When asked about my hobbies,I will anwser,……
4.还有第二个 China brush 前也不用加 The.just tell them……这里的主语 I 不应该省略掉.用 I will ……会更好.the words 前不加 The ,不是特指某个词语,所以也不用加.
5.“just tell them Rice paper originated in the Tang Dynasty” paper 后加 is .
“is soft,fountain ink and durability” 这里除了柔软,后面两个词应该改成形容词性.soft,XX and durable.墨水会晕开没时间帮你查啦,你百度下~
it made 之间加 is .