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英语作文 帮忙修改 很急
My favourite pet
My favourite pet is rabbit.Because it is very lovely and clever.Some yearsago,my father got me a rabbit.I called it Doudou.Its fur was very white.It had red eyes,long ears and short tail.It only ate vegetables and carrots.It didn't drink water.It used to play with me.I like it very much.But oneyear late,it died.
帮忙修改一下语法上的错误,可以的话把一些词语修改以下,最后加个我很伤心.谢谢了,很急.快的加分.
My favourite pet
My favourite pet is rabbit.Because it is very lovely and clever.Some yearsago,my father got me a rabbit.I called it Doudou.Its fur was very white.It had red eyes,long ears and short tail.It only ate vegetables and carrots.It didn't drink water.It used to play with me.I like it very much.But oneyear late,it died.
帮忙修改一下语法上的错误,可以的话把一些词语修改以下,最后加个我很伤心.谢谢了,很急.快的加分.
语法没有什么错误,只是很不地道,明显的中国式翻译.
给你重组一下：
Rabbit is my favourite pet.It is lovely and clever.My father give me a rabbit as present some years ago and I called it DouDou It had pure white fur,red eyes and a pair of long ears.It ate vegetables and carrots and drink little water.It usually palyed with me at that time.I like it very much,but it died one year later.I'm very sad about it.
给你重组一下：
Rabbit is my favourite pet.It is lovely and clever.My father give me a rabbit as present some years ago and I called it DouDou It had pure white fur,red eyes and a pair of long ears.It ate vegetables and carrots and drink little water.It usually palyed with me at that time.I like it very much,but it died one year later.I'm very sad about it.