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请会英语的帮我看下这段文字有哪些地方是错的
I thought I could live in Ur world
In my heart,you are all
请帮我翻译出来并指出错误的地方
But Last,My idea is wrong
You never know how much I love you
Just because you have already oblivion me
There have been the moment to feel the concern and love
but takes a long time forget you
After long,long time
I thought I had you forgotten in slowly
but you suddenly Appear ,Then tell me
In fact,your life has been very bad
At that time,my mood.You can never understand
I wonder what to comfort you
In my efforts to make you happy when
why do you vanish suddenly Also without telling me
Maybe,in your heart.I was so littleness
At first I don't know why
later,I finally understand ,You already do not belong to me
I really should not expect anything again
Even Without you ,I still have the whole world
Love for you has become a memory
Goodbye!My only love .Will never meet again
I thought I could live in Ur world
In my heart,you are all
请帮我翻译出来并指出错误的地方
But Last,My idea is wrong
You never know how much I love you
Just because you have already oblivion me
There have been the moment to feel the concern and love
but takes a long time forget you
After long,long time
I thought I had you forgotten in slowly
but you suddenly Appear ,Then tell me
In fact,your life has been very bad
At that time,my mood.You can never understand
I wonder what to comfort you
In my efforts to make you happy when
why do you vanish suddenly Also without telling me
Maybe,in your heart.I was so littleness
At first I don't know why
later,I finally understand ,You already do not belong to me
I really should not expect anything again
Even Without you ,I still have the whole world
Love for you has become a memory
Goodbye!My only love .Will never meet again
你的语法不错,但有些句子不太通顺.
要注意时态：现在和过去式变来变去很别扭.
I thought I could live in your world.
In my heart,you were my everything.
But I was wrong.
You never knew how much I loved you,
having already forgotten about me.(oblivion 是名词,不能在这里用)
There had been moments that I felt the concern(?最好换一个词) and love.
It would take a long time to forget about you.
After a long,long time,
when I thought I have slowly forgotten you,
you suddenly appear and tell me
your life had been,in fact,very tough.
You could never understand how I felt at that time.
I wonder how to comfort you.
Why,in my efforts to cheer you up,
did you vanish suddenly,without a word.
Maybe in your heart I was so small.
At first,I didn't know why.
Later,I finally realized you did not belong to me.
I really should not expect anything more.
Even without you,I still have the whole world.
Love for you has become a memory.
Goodbye,my only love.
We will never meet again.
要注意时态：现在和过去式变来变去很别扭.
I thought I could live in your world.
In my heart,you were my everything.
But I was wrong.
You never knew how much I loved you,
having already forgotten about me.(oblivion 是名词,不能在这里用)
There had been moments that I felt the concern(?最好换一个词) and love.
It would take a long time to forget about you.
After a long,long time,
when I thought I have slowly forgotten you,
you suddenly appear and tell me
your life had been,in fact,very tough.
You could never understand how I felt at that time.
I wonder how to comfort you.
Why,in my efforts to cheer you up,
did you vanish suddenly,without a word.
Maybe in your heart I was so small.
At first,I didn't know why.
Later,I finally realized you did not belong to me.
I really should not expect anything more.
Even without you,I still have the whole world.
Love for you has become a memory.
Goodbye,my only love.
We will never meet again.
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