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帮我看看作文里是否有的句子不对.顺便帮讲错的改正过来.
My family
I have a warm family.There are three people in my family :My mother,My father and I .
Father:My father is a manager.He is easy to angry..But he is very kindly for mum and I.Because he loves us.He is a football fun .So he always watches football match for all of the night.His another hobby is cook meal for us.
Mother:My mother is a teacher.She is kindly for everyone.All of the students are very like her.Of course she and my father are very lovely.(she is very love my dad)
She is a study "fun".She use nearly all her time to study.
I:I am the best student in my class.I am 13 years old.I like swimming best.So I always go swimming in my holiday.I love my family.
Do you like my family.
My family
I have a warm family.There are three people in my family :My mother,My father and I .
Father:My father is a manager.He is easy to angry..But he is very kindly for mum and I.Because he loves us.He is a football fun .So he always watches football match for all of the night.His another hobby is cook meal for us.
Mother:My mother is a teacher.She is kindly for everyone.All of the students are very like her.Of course she and my father are very lovely.(she is very love my dad)
She is a study "fun".She use nearly all her time to study.
I:I am the best student in my class.I am 13 years old.I like swimming best.So I always go swimming in my holiday.I love my family.
Do you like my family.
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帮你一一改过来吧
He is easy to angry很容易生气不能这么表达
应该为He has trouble comforting his temper.就是情绪不好
But he is very kindly for mum and I. 词汇用的不对,妈妈也不能写成mum,那是随意的写法,应该用书面语
But he is very kind to my mom and I.
He is a football fun 他是足球迷?football fan才对
His another hobby is cook meal for us.不对
Another hobby for him is cooking meal for us.
She is kindly for everyone.同上,改为kind to
All of the students are very like her改为All of her students like her very much,
.(she is very love my dad)
你想表达什么意思?
She is very lovely to my dad是其一
She loves my dad much是另一
She is a study "fun" She use nearly all her time to study.不对
She is euthusiastic at studying,she uses nearly all her time for studying.
其他就没了.
帮你一一改过来吧
He is easy to angry很容易生气不能这么表达
应该为He has trouble comforting his temper.就是情绪不好
But he is very kindly for mum and I. 词汇用的不对,妈妈也不能写成mum,那是随意的写法,应该用书面语
But he is very kind to my mom and I.
He is a football fun 他是足球迷?football fan才对
His another hobby is cook meal for us.不对
Another hobby for him is cooking meal for us.
She is kindly for everyone.同上,改为kind to
All of the students are very like her改为All of her students like her very much,
.(she is very love my dad)
你想表达什么意思?
She is very lovely to my dad是其一
She loves my dad much是另一
She is a study "fun" She use nearly all her time to study.不对
She is euthusiastic at studying,she uses nearly all her time for studying.
其他就没了.