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英语高手请进 修改一篇演讲稿
Youngsters,it isn’t very important where you come from when you enter into school.What important is how much you have harvest in the three years.Young people,it doesn’t matter Where you graduated from.What it matters is what you have created.
I recognize a senior in my department who just graduated three months ago .I still remember the first time I met him,he told me very proudly I am the long-distance running champion.I still remember his firm gaze and confident smile.During the three years he kept running 5000 meters every day and have read 1200 books.In October he participated the Marathon in Beijing ,I know he enjoys the feeling of running because so do I.He is creating a life just as he likes as well as he is harvesting.
We should be clear that where we’re going from higher vocational school?Different kinds of people have different answers.In my opinion,there is not so much difference between vocational students and university student.We can have the same wonderful time .we are all new generations.I believe as long as you really have taken a lot of efforts for your dream you will be worthy of the 3 years.Never pay too much attention about the past ,
Whatever we focus on determines how we feel.And how we feel—our state of mind—powerfully influences our actions and interactions.It affects how we work toward our goals.If you want to be happy and realize your value,choose to focus on the positive.If you keep focusing on failure,sadness,and losing—that's exactly where you will end up—a failure,sad,and a loser.Whatever we look for we will find
Many times in our lives,we are dropped,crumpled,and ground into the dirt by the decisions we make,and circumstances that come away.We feel as though we are worthless.But no matter what happened,or what will happen,you will never lose your value.The worth of your lives comes in what we are doing now
To realize our value is living each day in the best way you can ,happily,helpfully ,and good.
英语高手请进 修改一篇演讲稿
第三行harvested
第四行from去掉,where是介词
第二段第三行是不是用错代词了?应该是he?