会英语的来.帮我改改句子,拜托了
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会英语的来.帮我改改句子,拜托了
it's bad for their eyes to watch tv too long times . they can do many outdoor activities instead of watching tv . that's good star . a film star or a actor. they will spending more times on watching tv . it will be a wast of time for them . their parents expect them can be a useful person . in the future . They spend life time in teaching them to do a successful person. so they shouldn't let their parents feel disappointed
it's bad for their eyes to watch tv too long times . they can do many outdoor activities instead of watching tv . that's good star . a film star or a actor. they will spending more times on watching tv . it will be a wast of time for them . their parents expect them can be a useful person . in the future . They spend life time in teaching them to do a successful person. so they shouldn't let their parents feel disappointed
这里我只是简单的改一些语法上的错误.【】处是修改的地方或者添加的地方.
it's bad for their eyes to watch tv too long 【time】.最后一个是time而不是times.
that's 【a 】good star ,a film star or 【an】 actor.前面少了a,第二个是是an,因为actor的第一个读音是元音.
they will 【spend 】more 【time】 on watching tv will后面直接加动词原形就可以了,time的问题同上.
their parents expect them 【to】 be a useful person
They spend 【lifelong】 time 【on】 teaching them to 【be】 a successful person.
it's bad for their eyes to watch tv too long 【time】.最后一个是time而不是times.
that's 【a 】good star ,a film star or 【an】 actor.前面少了a,第二个是是an,因为actor的第一个读音是元音.
they will 【spend 】more 【time】 on watching tv will后面直接加动词原形就可以了,time的问题同上.
their parents expect them 【to】 be a useful person
They spend 【lifelong】 time 【on】 teaching them to 【be】 a successful person.
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