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帮忙修改一下这篇文章中的错误处
the winter of 2010,I want to find a job to spend my winter vacation ,so I went to a KFC with a Cleaners,I worked 8 hours every day ,the duration of the job is three weeks.the work is very hard and dull ,I was feel so tired ,even give up.,before the New semester ,I end the job, At the same time, I discovery of Social practice is of great significance to me,and I found I learn more about work and life ,so if we want a better life,we must study hard and work hard
the winter of 2010,I want to find a job to spend my winter vacation ,so I went to a KFC with a Cleaners,I worked 8 hours every day ,the duration of the job is three weeks.the work is very hard and dull ,I was feel so tired ,even give up.,before the New semester ,I end the job, At the same time, I discovery of Social practice is of great significance to me,and I found I learn more about work and life ,so if we want a better life,we must study hard and work hard
时间前面要加in,
with应改为as,
is改为are,因为后面是复数,
时态不要变来变去的,统一用一般现在陈述事实,
I discovery of Social practice is of great significance to me.这句在i后面加上feel或find从句.
with应改为as,
is改为are,因为后面是复数,
时态不要变来变去的,统一用一般现在陈述事实,
I discovery of Social practice is of great significance to me.这句在i后面加上feel或find从句.