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谁能帮我改一下这个英语作文.
We went to Chongqing Garden Expo Park yesterday.many of us brings some food and drinks.Some people brought camera.It took us about one hour to get there by bus.There were many visitors.They looked excited."What a beautifu place!"I said.Then we visited the different kinds of Chinese traditional garden and took some photos.We also learned a lot of knowledge.
When we have fun exploring,I noticed Li Lei was lost.We really worried about him and asked a guard for help.Thanks goodness!We found him at last.Then we enjoyed ourselves.
What a special day!
We went to Chongqing Garden Expo Park yesterday.many of us brings some food and drinks.Some people brought camera.It took us about one hour to get there by bus.There were many visitors.They looked excited."What a beautifu place!"I said.Then we visited the different kinds of Chinese traditional garden and took some photos.We also learned a lot of knowledge.
When we have fun exploring,I noticed Li Lei was lost.We really worried about him and asked a guard for help.Thanks goodness!We found him at last.Then we enjoyed ourselves.
What a special day!
ings---brought（昨天的事,应用过去时）
garden---gardens（复数）
have---had（时态）
Then we enjoyed ourselves.可改成：Then we came back home.（玩得差不多了,就可以回家了）
再问： 请问还有吗？
再答： Chinese traditional---traditional Chinese really worried---were really worried 希望对你有启发，如对你有帮助，请记得及时采纳
再问： Chinese traditional garden是中国传统园林的意思
再答： 是形容词的排序，traditional应该在Chinese前面： 一座中国传统园林：a traditional Chinese garden
garden---gardens（复数）
have---had（时态）
Then we enjoyed ourselves.可改成：Then we came back home.（玩得差不多了,就可以回家了）
再问： 请问还有吗？
再答： Chinese traditional---traditional Chinese really worried---were really worried 希望对你有启发，如对你有帮助，请记得及时采纳
再问： Chinese traditional garden是中国传统园林的意思
再答： 是形容词的排序，traditional应该在Chinese前面： 一座中国传统园林：a traditional Chinese garden