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初二英语作文改错纠错我们要举办个英语演讲,下面是我的演讲稿,能不能给我纠错一下Hello,everyone!I am B

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初二英语作文改错纠错
我们要举办个英语演讲,下面是我的演讲稿,能不能给我纠错一下
Hello,everyone!I am Bill.I am a student.I make some resolutions.In the past,I hardly ever help with housework.In the future,I will do more homework.In the past,Ieat junk food four or five times a week.In the future,I will never eat junk food.In the past,I always play computer games.In the future,I will play fewer computer games.it is good for my eyes.I will outgoing.Sometimes I like to watch TV shows.I like movies,comediesand cartoons.Idon't mind soap opera and I can't stand scary movies and news.In this winter,I will draw and play soccer.In the future I think I can be better.
初二英语作文改错纠错我们要举办个英语演讲,下面是我的演讲稿,能不能给我纠错一下Hello,everyone!I am B
In the past,I hardly ever help with housework.改为:In the past ,I didn't do my homework carefully.
In the past,Ieat junk food four or five times a week.改为:In the past ,I ate junk food four or five times a week.
In the past,I always play computer games.改为:In the past,I always played computer games.
I will outgoing.改为:I will be outgoing.
.In this winter,I will draw and play soccer..改为:In this winter,I am going to draw pictures and play soccer.
再问: 谢谢,那个不是homework而是housework,我打错了