英语翻译帮我看看这篇文章有没有语法单词之类的错误,如果有,请改正,不要改变原意Dear Dan,Hello!I am a

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帮我看看这篇文章有没有语法单词之类的错误,如果有,请改正,不要改变原意
Dear Dan,
Hello!I am a Chinese girl.My name is Xiao and I'm thirteen years old.I have been addicted to "Harry potter" for three years.And my favourite role is Harry potter.Can this be taken as compliment to you?Haha,of course this can.I like you and all the others in this movie quite a lot.But as far as I know,the whole story of Harry potter is coming to an end,which makes me feel sad,as Harry potter has accompanied me for so many years.Even I myself has been involved into it to fight against the Lord Voldemort,to attend the thrilling and dangerous Goblet of Fire competition...Harry potter gives me lots of fun.I know you are busy,maybe you can't write me back.But when you read this letter,don't forget to smile,because your smile is very special charm!
Your fans

哈哈,13岁能写出这样的文章很不错~纠错开始~
第一行：My name is后面是个姓吗?应该是名+姓哦.比如“苏小杯”,Xiaobei Su.
第二行：Harry Potter,H和P都应大写.（别忘记改后面几行中出现的）
第三行：compliment是可数的名词,所以...对,前面加a
倒数第二行：your smile has very special charm才对
署名：fan是可数（虽然通常大家一起行动）,这里指的是你这个小fan,所以单数即可

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