求一篇关于online shopping的英文作文.要点1越来越多的人喜欢网上购物.要点2也会带来些问题,要点三,我

求一篇关于online shopping的英文作文.要点1越来越多的人喜欢网上购物.要点2也会带来些问题,要点三,我

With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computer , shopping online has become a commonplace in our life . Chinese people are buying things online and the shipping companies are busy to no end. Online shopping is very convenient. All you have to do is sit at home and wait for your package to come instead of hovering outside in the cold wind. We can buy almost everything without going out.
However, enjoyment of retail shopping lost. Many people enjoy shopping with others and it is often a good way to make social connections. When shopping online, the enjoyment is lost. Besides, you may lose your private information during online shopping. Although having access to a very large number of products is highly desirable, consumers have limited cognitive resources and may simply be unable to process the potentially vast amounts of information about these alternatives
It seems that the online business contains many commercial opportunities . Many people want to seek their fortune on it. However , I think this kind of business now is close to saturation . There are thousands of shops online, it’s a problem how to make your shop outstanding and attractive among the “shop sea"
再问： 自己的观点感觉不太明确
再答： 根据个人想法，稍加修改就好了