英语语法好的来一下,看看有没语法错

英语语法好的来一下,看看有没语法错
有些人认为奢华是贫穷的反义词.它不是,它是粗俗的反义词.
Some people think luxury is the opposite of poverty.It is not.It is the opposite of vulgarity.
A women who doesn't wear perfume has no future.
一个不喷香水的女人是没有未来的.
A woman should be two things:classy and fabulous.
一个女人应该是这2样：优雅而惊艳.
When accessorizing,always take off the last thing you put on.
用配饰,永远把你最后戴上的东西拿下来.
There are people who have money and people who are rich.
有些人很有钱,而有些人很富有.
My reason for choosing diamonds is that,dense as they are,they represent the greatest worth in the smallest volume.
我之所以选钻石,是因为它们的致密——在最小的单位里体现最大的价值.
Luxury must be comfortable,otherwise it is not luxury.
奢华必须舒适,否则并非奢华.
I was the one who changed,it wasn't fashion.I was the one who was in fashion.
变的是我,而非时尚,时尚的是我.
I love luxury.And luxury lies not in richness and ornateness but in the absence of vulgarity.Vulgarity is the ugliest word in our language.I stay in the game to fight it.
我爱奢华.奢华并不依存于阔绰和华丽,而是显现在不粗俗之中.粗俗是我们语言中最丑陋的字眼.我身在这场竞争中,就是为了对抗它.
A fashion that does not reach the streets is not a fashion.
穿不上街的时尚,就不是时尚.
时尚不仅仅指服装而已,时尚存在于天空中、街道上.它和观念、生活方式,以及各种变化都有关系.fashion is not something that exists in dresses only.Fashion is in the sky,in the street,fashion has to do with ideas,the way we live,what is happening.
时尚是建筑学：有关比例的问题.Fashion is architecture:it is a matter of proportions.
时装消失,只有风格是一样的.fashion fades,only style remains the same
最好的颜色在整个世界是一个看起来不错的你!the best color in the whole world is the one that looks good on you!
一个女孩应该两件事：优雅和神话般.a girl should be two things:classy and fabulous
我不知道一个女人可以离开家没有确定自己一点-如果仅仅出于优雅.那么你永远不知道,也许这一天是她改变命运的一天,并最好是尽可能为漂亮的命运.i don't know how a woman can leave the house without fixing herself up a little--if only out of politeness.and then you never know,maybe that's the day she has date with destiny.and it's best to be as pretty as possible for destiny.
那一句错，应该怎么改

1 除非是摘自名人之口,一般不用it is not 去强调,用no 就行.语法错误也谈不上
2 a woman 单数形式,是你笔误吧 喷香水这个动词词组还是转换名词好 a woman without perfume has no future 几乎不用wear,perfume本身就能做动词
3 a woman should at least owe these 2 things:一个女人至少得有这2样.
您说的那句中文我就不喜欢.太小家子气了~用be 也是不好的
受不了.改不下去了.