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假设你是李华，请先回答下面的问题然后根据问题的答案写一篇英语文章 Questions：1.What will you be in ten years? 2.What will happen then? 3.How will you make it come true? My name is Li Hua .I am 13 years old .I am now a high school student.I will be a dentist in ten years.If I become a dentist,I will help many patients and I will be happy.I think il's a holy job .And becoming a dentist can make much money.So I want to be a dentist .After that I will make much money .I will buy a big house for my parents and give money to charity.It will help many people who are in trouble. I know it's not easy to become a dentist.So from now on I will work harder at allmy lessons and go to a good university to learn medicine lessons.I will try my best to make my dream come true. 作文明天要用，请老师仔细帮我改一下！！！
解题思路： 语言通顺，内容完整，时态准确，层次清楚，只是个别地方出现用词不当。
解题过程：
My name is Li Hua .I am 13 years old .I am now a middle school student .I will be a dentist in ten years.If I become a dentist,I will help many patients and I will be happy.I think it's a holy job .And becoming a dentist can make much money.So I want to be a dentist .After （ that去掉） I （will 去掉）make much money ，I will buy a big house for my parents and give money to charities .It will help many people who are in trouble.
I know it's not easy to become a dentist.So from now on I will work harder at all my lessons and go to a good university to learn medicine courses .I will try my best to make my dream come true.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
My name is Li Hua .I am 13 years old .I am now a middle school student .I will be a dentist in ten years.If I become a dentist,I will help many patients and I will be happy.I think it's a holy job .And becoming a dentist can make much money.So I want to be a dentist .After （ that去掉） I （will 去掉）make much money ，I will buy a big house for my parents and give money to charities .It will help many people who are in trouble.
I know it's not easy to become a dentist.So from now on I will work harder at all my lessons and go to a good university to learn medicine courses .I will try my best to make my dream come true.
最终答案：略