我写了一篇英语作文,麻烦你们帮我看看有什么错误,这是初中的,看看可以打几分,

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我写了一篇英语作文,麻烦你们帮我看看有什么错误,这是初中的,看看可以打几分,
Should teenagers go out with their friends on weekends
Recently ,I’ve had a discussion with myparents about whether teenagers should go out with their friends on weekends.
My parents think it not good for us go out
with friends on weekends,they think it’s waste time on weekends,we’d better
go over lessons or have a good sleep instead.And if we can help parents do
some housework,they will be more happier.
But I don’t agree,I think take part in
activities is a very important part of our life,after five busy and tired
weekends,we should relaxed ourseves.
Sowe ‘d better go out with our friends on weekends.

Recently ,I’ve had a discussion with myparents ---------这句有Recently,也就是说最近,过去时就行了,'ve去掉.
My parents think( it) not good for us go out---------it's
they will be (more happier)-------------------more删除
after five busy and tired weekends--------------我就不改了,你自己看看吧^_^
我给12
再问：在繁忙劳累的学习日之后应该怎么改啊 they will be much happier可以吗
再答： after busy weekdays. much happier这个可以的

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