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英语作文.麻烦各位帮找错
when i was in primate school.i don't understand what love it is.i had a bad impress of my mother in my memory.because my mother told that give something nice to little sister .as soon as i was angry ,she said you is order than her ,you should take care of her .i said nothing and i went to my room.the next day ,i went to the school in a hurry .because the click wasn't rang.when i arrived school.i sit in the seat and took out of book from bag .i find that my practise wasn't carry.i was very worried .at this moment my mother appeared in front of me .she said nothing and turn back .i said thank you to her.this is the first felling what love it is
英语作文.麻烦各位帮找错
the next day ,应该把the去掉.the click wasn't rang.单词click应该改为alarm clock.i had a bad impress of 中的impress 改为impressiom.when i was in primate school中的改为Wen I studied in primate school.i don't understand what love it is.这句话中的don't 改为didn't.
wasn't rang的wasn't 改为didn't.when i arrived school.在arrived 之后加个“at”.took out of book from bag .在from 之后加个“my”.i find that my practise wasn't carry这句话中改为I found that I left my exercise at home.and turn back 这句话中的改为returned.