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Have you heard of QinHuangdao ?It is my hometown, a beautiful coastal city. QinHuangdao is located in the north-east of HeBei province. It is famous for its beauty and pleasant climate. There are beautiful mountains and beaches. The mountains are not very tall. They are covered with a lot of green trees and beautiful flowers. You can not only exercise but also relax on the mountains. As for the sea, I think it is the most beautiful sight. The blue sky, the amazing sea, the singing birds, the happy smile on the face...all of these will make you feel that you are in a beautiful picture. In summer, a lot of tourists come here to keep away from the hot weather. They swim in the sea or relax on the beach .They can also have delicious sea food and many other kinds of snacks. Even in winter, yon can also have a lot of fun. The most interesting is ice-skating, which will make you feel that you are flying freely .It is so exciting. If you are lucky, maybe you can catch sight of snow, which is only seen in northern china. There are many other beautiful scenes in my hometown.. Such as the Great Wall ,the Ocean Park and the Wild Animal Zoo In the year of 2008, the World Olympic Games were held in china and the football match was held in QinHuang dao successfully. More and more people all over the world come to know the beautiful city. I am so proud of my hometown .If you have time, be sure to come here. QinHuang dao will become the most pleasant memory of your life. Thank you ! 老师我觉得有些多，能不能删几句。 请崔老师回答
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孩子 我重新给你写一篇吧 这篇 生词太多了
Do you know QinHuangdao ? It's my hometown, a beautiful city. It is in Hebei Province. It is famous for its beauty and climate. There are mountains and beaches , too.
In summer , many people come here to spend holiday and they have a good time here. In winter , we can also have a lot of fun.
Ice- skating is very interesting and if you are lucky, you can see snow on the mountains. There are many other beautiful scenes(风景)，such as the Great Wall, the Ocean Park and the Wild Animal Zoo.
I like QinHuangdao . If you have time, do come here. Welcome to my hometown!
孩子 你看看这篇怎样 如果短 我就再增加一些 对了 你需要 译文吗？
最终答案：略
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孩子 我重新给你写一篇吧 这篇 生词太多了
Do you know QinHuangdao ? It's my hometown, a beautiful city. It is in Hebei Province. It is famous for its beauty and climate. There are mountains and beaches , too.
In summer , many people come here to spend holiday and they have a good time here. In winter , we can also have a lot of fun.
Ice- skating is very interesting and if you are lucky, you can see snow on the mountains. There are many other beautiful scenes(风景)，such as the Great Wall, the Ocean Park and the Wild Animal Zoo.
I like QinHuangdao . If you have time, do come here. Welcome to my hometown!
孩子 你看看这篇怎样 如果短 我就再增加一些 对了 你需要 译文吗？
最终答案：略