有没有一些错误my name is ***,I'm 15 years old.I'm a lively Chinese

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有没有一些错误
my name is ***,I'm 15 years old.I'm a lively Chinese girl.I like singing songs running and playing the guiter.I surf the Internet all the time.I don't like go shopping and I think that rock is terridle.I hope we can become good friends in the near future.
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My name is ***,and I'm 15 years old.I'm a vivacious Chinese girl.I like singing songs,running and playing the guitar.What's more,I surf the Internet all the time.However,I don't like to go shopping and I think that rock is terrible.Anyway,I hope we can become good friends in the near future.
这个是改好的文章
原文有些拼写语法错误
另外加了点连词是文章更流利了些~

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