求教一篇参观动物园的英语日记

求教一篇参观动物园的英语日记
6月13日是星期天,天气晴朗,李明和李红一起去参观动物园,请以李明的口气写一篇日记.内容要点如下:
1.距离:离家约50公里
2.交通工具:坐公共汽车
3.时间:上午8点出发,60分钟后到达
4.动物:大象,熊,狮子老虎,蛇,熊猫,斑马,猴子等等,对猴子略描述.
约100字左右.
分不多,只有40分了,

这个是原文,我也不知道你到底要小学还是初中的日记,我给你的这篇是按照小学程度写的,如果不行你再问,下面的是原文：
我的名字叫李明,我的朋友叫李红,今天是6月13号,天气晴朗,我们准备去动物园参观.我的计划如下,动物园离家约50公里,我们选择坐公共汽车去动物园,需要60分钟能到达,这样的话,我们早上8点就必须出发了.在路上,我们的心情很激动,看着树上的小鸟唧唧喳喳的唱歌,好像知道我们要去参观动物园,也在为我们高兴呢.大约过了一个小时,我们终于到达目的地了,我和小红下了车准备开始我们一天的开心的旅途.
来到动物园,一进大门,绿树成荫美丽极了.有好多的小动物呢,大象,熊,狮子老虎,蛇,熊猫,斑马,猴子等等.前面有座假山,上面有几只小猴子蹦来蹦去.我和小红就一下子围了过去,哇……猴子真多啊!有的猴子在吃桃子,有的猴子在看风景,还有的猴子在假山上荡秋千……最有意思的是猴子妈妈抱着小猴子捉虱子了.逗得我们哈哈大笑起来.瞧,它们玩的多开心呀!今天参观猴子我们也很高兴、快乐.
这个是翻译过来的：
My name is Li Ming,my friend called LI,today is June 13,the weather was fine,we are ready to go to the zoo to visit.My plan is as follows,the zoo is about 50 km away from home,we chose to take a bus to the zoo,60 minutes to arrive,so we must be 8 am off.On the road,we feel very excited,looking at the birds twitter in the trees,singing as if he knew we were going to visit the zoo,but also for us happy.After about an hour,we finally reach their destination,and I and the little red car down ready to begin our day of fun in the journey.
Came to the zoo,into a door,tree-lined extremely beautiful.It has a lot of small animals,elephants,bears,lions and tigers,snakes,pandas,zebras,monkeys and so on.Block rockery in front,above a few small monkeys jumping up and down.Red around me and suddenly the past,wow ......monkey is really much ah!Some monkeys eating peaches,and some monkeys in sightseeing,there are monkeys swinging in the rockery on ......the most interesting is the monkey mother holding a small monkey to catch lice.Amused us laugh.Look,they play how delighted!Today visit the monkeys and we are very happy happy.
都是我自己写的,应该能用吧,