搜狗做题网谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语作文（高一）
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谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语作文（高一）
Dear teacher,
my name is Li xiang.l am writing a letter to you to ask for some help .so far as l ,l think the english is diffculty whose english grade is less than before .For one reason ,l think the strange vocabulary is very really much too big ,it will be diffcult for me to remember the vocabulary .For another reason ,the grammar is so diffcult that l can not understand it.At present ,l am very concern about my english .Then ,l hope to you can give some good advice for us and l want to you can teach our more carefully than before .At last,l hope that my english will imporve than before .
best wishes
Yours
li xiang
这篇文章是我们考试的作文 我英语比较差 作文也是,因为是考试 老师都是直接打分得 没帮我改错 所以希望大家帮我改一改错误 不需要翻译 不光看语法 还要看用词的恰当啊 准确性啊 指出我的缺点这些的
下面是这篇作文的要求：
假如你叫李想,在光明中学读书,在高中学习英语得过程中遇到了一些问题,想得到老师的帮助,并想给班级的英语老师一些建议,以帮助自己学好英语 下面表格中只给了简单提示 请你结合自己的实际情况给英语老师写一封求助信 内容如下：
学习英语时遇到的问题：1.生词多,记忆有难度
2..
向英语老师提出的建议：1.介绍一些学习英语得好方法
2.
Dear teacher,
my name is Li xiang.l am writing a letter to you to ask for some help .so far as l ,l think the english is diffculty whose english grade is less than before .For one reason ,l think the strange vocabulary is very really much too big ,it will be diffcult for me to remember the vocabulary .For another reason ,the grammar is so diffcult that l can not understand it.At present ,l am very concern about my english .Then ,l hope to you can give some good advice for us and l want to you can teach our more carefully than before .At last,l hope that my english will imporve than before .
best wishes
Yours
li xiang
这篇文章是我们考试的作文 我英语比较差 作文也是,因为是考试 老师都是直接打分得 没帮我改错 所以希望大家帮我改一改错误 不需要翻译 不光看语法 还要看用词的恰当啊 准确性啊 指出我的缺点这些的
下面是这篇作文的要求：
假如你叫李想,在光明中学读书,在高中学习英语得过程中遇到了一些问题,想得到老师的帮助,并想给班级的英语老师一些建议,以帮助自己学好英语 下面表格中只给了简单提示 请你结合自己的实际情况给英语老师写一封求助信 内容如下：
学习英语时遇到的问题：1.生词多,记忆有难度
2..
向英语老师提出的建议：1.介绍一些学习英语得好方法
2.
l think the english is diffculty whose english grade is less than before ,这个句子不对吧,whose 的先行词是什么 l think the english is diffculty 是一个完整的句子,后面只能加状语从句连词不能用whose
l think the strange vocabulary is very really much too big ,把very去掉 very really 都是形容词,形容词不能修饰形容词
For another reason ,another应该要改成 the other 因为一共只有两个原因
l hope to you can give some good advice for us,把to改成that,to后面不能加句子
l want to you can teach our 句子里有两个谓语 can want错误
再问： l think the english is diffculty whose english grade is less than before ,这个句子不对吧， 那请问要怎么改
再答： l think the english is diffculty for people whose english is not very good
l think the strange vocabulary is very really much too big ,把very去掉 very really 都是形容词,形容词不能修饰形容词
For another reason ,another应该要改成 the other 因为一共只有两个原因
l hope to you can give some good advice for us,把to改成that,to后面不能加句子
l want to you can teach our 句子里有两个谓语 can want错误
再问： l think the english is diffculty whose english grade is less than before ,这个句子不对吧， 那请问要怎么改
再答： l think the english is diffculty for people whose english is not very good