搜狗做题网谁帮我看一下这篇英语短文有没有语病?
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谁帮我看一下这篇英语短文有没有语病?
New Year once again going to come, I am very happy because I will be a long one years old. 14 years old, or an unknown world, must also be full of ups and downs. However, I really look forward to the advent of the new year !
我很着急的~~~~
1、New Year once will arrival , I are very joyful, because of I will grow one-year-old. 14-year-old, be still a unknown world, definitely is also to have been full of joys and sorrows of life. However, I be fond of expecting the New Year approaching!
2、New Year once again going to come, I am very happy because I will be a long one years old. 14 years old, or an unknown world, must also be full of ups and downs. However, I really look forward to the advent of the new year ah!
3、New Year's coming again, I am very happy, because I will long age. 14 years old, or an unknown world, certainly also full of frustrations. However, I expect the coming New Year!
那么，这几篇短文那个是对的呢？
New Year once again going to come, I am very happy because I will be a long one years old. 14 years old, or an unknown world, must also be full of ups and downs. However, I really look forward to the advent of the new year !
我很着急的~~~~
1、New Year once will arrival , I are very joyful, because of I will grow one-year-old. 14-year-old, be still a unknown world, definitely is also to have been full of joys and sorrows of life. However, I be fond of expecting the New Year approaching!
2、New Year once again going to come, I am very happy because I will be a long one years old. 14 years old, or an unknown world, must also be full of ups and downs. However, I really look forward to the advent of the new year ah!
3、New Year's coming again, I am very happy, because I will long age. 14 years old, or an unknown world, certainly also full of frustrations. However, I expect the coming New Year!
那么，这几篇短文那个是对的呢？
New Year comes again in an blink of an eye,I am very happy because I am going to be one year elder.14 years old,or an unknown world,also must be full of ups and downs.However,I really look forward of the new year !
错的有点多~有些大改动~
错的有点多~有些大改动~